April 4, 2021
Favourite food
Firsts of all, I love burgers. It's my definite answer if you ask me about my favourite food! I already wrote a journal about them. I totally love the combinations of all those ingredients. I say that every single ingredient that goes into a burger must taste perfect on its own. At home, we came up with three slightly different toppings. The meat ingredient is either ground beef or home-made chicken nuggets. I find the best topping to be ground beef, melted cheddar, fried bacon, caramelized onions, bacon jam, sliced tomatoes, rucoli, and a fantastic sauce made of mayonnaise, cottage cheese, and bear's garlic.
I shouldn't forget spicy food. Chili makes every food taste better! Once you taste it with chili, you can't go without it the next time—you feel like something is missing.
Favourite food
Firsts of all, I love burgers.
It's my definite answer if you ask me about my favourite food!
I have already wroitten a journal about them.
"Already" is usually used with past perfect or present perfect tense.
I totally love the combinations of all thoese ingredients.
"these" refers to things close in time or proximity, "those" for things more distant and removed from the speaker.
I say that every single ingredient that goes into a burger must taste perfect on its own.
At home, we came up with three slightly different toppings.
The meat ingredient is either ground beef or home-made chicken nuggets.
I find the best topping to be ground beef, melted cheddar, fried bacon, caramelized onions, bacon jam, sliced tomatoes, rucolia, and a fantastic sauce made of mayonnaise, cottage cheese, and bear's garlic.
I am not sure what "rucoli" is. I guess you mean the plant "rucola"
Finally, I shouldn't forget spicy food.
It's good to begin the sentence with a transitional word, to make the passage read better.
Chili makes every food taste better!
Once you taste it with chili, you can't go without it the next time—you feel like something is missing.
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April 7, 2021
Thank you for the corrections!
April 7, 2021
I find the best topping to be ground beef, melted cheddar, fried bacon, caramelized onions, bacon jam, sliced tomatoes, rucolia, and a fantastic sauce made of mayonnaise, cottage cheese, and bear's garlic.
According to online sources, there are many names for rucola. I wasn't sure which one to use. Thank you!
April 7, 2021
I just looked this up now online, and I think the differences in name may be regional. As an American I call it "arugula" as that is its name in American English, but there are apparently many other names for it as well! The word "rucoli" does appear as a valid name in Wikipedia. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Eruca_vesicaria
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Firsts of all, I love burgers. First |
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It's my definite answer if you ask me about my favourite food! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I already wrote a journal about them. I have already wr "Already" is usually used with past perfect or present perfect tense. |
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I totally love the combinations of all those ingredients. I totally love "these" refers to things close in time or proximity, "those" for things more distant and removed from the speaker. |
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I say that every single ingredient that goes into a burger must taste perfect on its own. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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At home, we came up with three slightly different toppings. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The meat ingredient is either ground beef or home-made chicken nuggets. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I find the best topping to be ground beef, melted cheddar, fried bacon, caramelized onions, bacon jam, sliced tomatoes, rucoli, and a fantastic sauce made of mayonnaise, cottage cheese, and bear's garlic. I find the best topping to be ground beef, melted cheddar, fried bacon, caramelized onions, bacon jam, sliced tomatoes, rucol I am not sure what "rucoli" is. I guess you mean the plant "rucola" |
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I shouldn't forget spicy food. Finally, I shouldn't forget spicy food. It's good to begin the sentence with a transitional word, to make the passage read better. |
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Chili makes every food taste better! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Once you taste it with chili, you can't go without it the next time—you feel like something is missing. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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