It is the day, I came out from my mothers womb in the St Ann's hospital, D. The doctor handeds over a little baby girl to babiesthe father , the little baby didn't even open her eyes.

- Comma right after day is a little unnatural so I removed it
- You use present tense in 'it is the day ...' so you need to use present tense with the rest of the sentence, i.e handed -> hands
- You could also write 'to her father' but I think 'the father' sounds better and it's implicit that the father is the babies due to context
- Commas always have a space after them and never a space before them

The little girl with has small cute hands and legs, moreover they are very delicate like rose flower petals and here comes thebut most important partly, the girl in not fair skinned, the. Her skin color is mixed brown and black.

Reworded it slightly to sound more smooth, writing 'here comes the important part' does not fit with the poetic part earlier of 'like rose flower petals'

We all have some doubt, and the doubt is "she said the girl is very cute and why ,, then why is she talking about skin color?".

In all our thoughts we thought that we don't care about the looks of a person, but, i that is not thehow actual current society behaves.

But the one who is holding the baby is standing still and filled his eyes fill with tears.He is literally he is crying while seeinglooking at his daughter.

- looking is a better verb than seeing here. Seeing isn't a very intimate verb

After some time he openeds his mouth and calledsays to her "AMMA AMMA" and the little girl crying andgirl openeds her eyes and seeingand to see her father with gentle smile.

- Changed the tenses to fit with the present used in the rest of the text

That is the first time she smileds while seeing her father and till nowthis day she smiles like the same way and the reason behind her smile is always her fathers love , affection, care and countless sacrifices.

- Changed tenses to be in present to fit with rest of the story.