June 2, 2025
Today, I read a short play similar to the Shakespeare's "Macbeth"; It's called "The rise of Darian" in which a valorous soldier named Darian experienced an ethical dilemmas between loyalty and ambition after hearing a prophecy from a mysterious Seer. Soon, under the manipulations of his wife, the temptation of the throne won over and he betrayed his king just like the foretold prophecy. However, it only led him to a deep regret and emotional collapse in the end.
This short play has got me thinking the complicated psychology of humans and how we cannot reject our own desire and lust although we see the terrible consequences of our action.
Moreover, I am very much intrigued in how much the element of prophecy influence Darian's life in the story. What if he did not meet the Seer who foretold his destiny? Will he have to go through such perilous journey to become a king? And how about in reality? How much control do we have on our own lives? We live our lives through pressure and expectations from others, and their manipulative influence make us lose ourselves to the point that we cannot differentiate that our goals and desire in life truly belonged to us or to them. When I compared with the reality that we are living, I felt utterly helpless and anxious about the future course of my life—whether I would be living in the life of my choice happily or in people's expectation miserably.
Today, I read a short play similar to the Shakespeare's "Macbeth"; It's called "The rise of Darian" in which a valorous soldier named Darian experienced an ethical dilemmas between loyalty and ambition after hearing a prophecy from a mysterious Seer.
If he experienced one ethical dilemma, than you dont need the s at the end. If he experienced more than one ethical dilemma, keep the s but remove the 'an'
Soon, under the manipulations of his wife, and the temptation of the throne won over, and he betrayed his king, just like the foretold prophecy.
makes more sequential sense
However, it only led him to a deep regret and emotional collapse in the end.
This short play has got me thinking about the complicated psychology of humans and how we cannot reject our own desire and lust although we see the terrible consequences of our actions.
Moreover, I am very much intrigued in how much the element of prophecy influenced Darian's life in the story.
use the past tense
What if he did not meet the Seer who foretold his destiny?
We live our lives through pressure and expectations from others, and their manipulative influence make us lose ourselves to the point that we cannot differentiate thatif our goals and desire in life truly belonged to us or to them.
When I compared with the reality that we are living, I felt utterly helpless and anxious about the future course of my life—whether I would be living in the life of my choice happily or in people's expectation miserably.
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Overall incredibly good work! Just a few minor corrections so that it reads easier. Great job :)
Today, I read a short play similar to the Shakespeare's "Macbeth"; Iit's called "The rise of Darian" in which a valorous soldier named Darian experienced an ethical dilemmas between loyalty and desire, after hearing a prophecy from a mysterious Seer.
Soon, under the manipulations of his wife, the temptation of the throne won over and he betrayed his king just like the foretold prophecy.
However, it only led him to a deep regret and an emotional collapse in the end.
This short play has got me thinking about the complicated psychology of humans and how we cannot reject our own desire and lust although we already see the terrible consequences of our actions.
Moreover, I am very much intrigued in how much the element of prophecy influenced Darian's life in the story.
Willould he have to go through such a perilous journey to become a king?
We live our lives through pressure and expectations from others, and their manipulative influences make us lose ourselves to the point that we cannot differentiate thatwhether our goals and desire in life truly belonged to us or to them.
When I compared with the reality that we are living, I felt utterly helpless and anxious about the future course of my life—whether I would be living in the life of my choice happily or in people's expectation miserably.
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Great work!
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And how about in reality? |
How much control do we have on our own lives? |
We live our lives through pressure and expectations from others, and their manipulative influence make us lose ourselves to the point that we cannot differentiate that our goals and desire in life truly belonged to us or to them. We live our lives through pressure and expectations from others, and their manipulative influences make us lose ourselves to the point that we cannot differentiate We live our lives through pressure and expectations from others, and their manipulative influence make us lose ourselves to the point that we cannot differentiate |
When I compared with the reality that we are living, I felt utterly helpless and anxious about the future course of my life—whether I would be living in the life of my choice happily or in people's expectation miserably. When I compared with the reality that we are living, I felt utterly helpless and anxious about the future course of my life—whether I would be living in the life of my choice happily or in people's expectation miserably. When I compared with the reality that we are living, I felt utterly helpless and anxious about the future course of my life—whether I would be living |
Today, I read a short play similar to the Shakespeare's "Macbeth"; It's called "The rise of Darian" in which a valorous soldier named Darian experienced an ethical dilemmas between loyalty and ambition after hearing a prophecy from a mysterious Seer. Today, I read a short play similar to the Shakespeare's "Macbeth"; It's called "The rise of Darian" in which a valorous soldier named Darian experienced an ethical dilemma If he experienced one ethical dilemma, than you dont need the s at the end. If he experienced more than one ethical dilemma, keep the s but remove the 'an' |
This short play has got me thinking the complicated psychology of humans and how we cannot reject our own desire and lust although we see the terrible consequences of our action. This short play has got me thinking about the complicated psychology of humans and how we cannot reject our own desire and lust although we see the terrible consequences of our actions. |
This short play has got me thinking the complicated psychology of humans and how we cannot reject our own desire and lust although we already see the terrible consequences of our action. This short play has got me thinking about the complicated psychology of humans and how we cannot reject our own desire and lust although we already see the terrible consequences of our actions. |
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