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Lucas_lab2

Sept. 8, 2025

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Fancy restaurant

The last weekend was the birthday of my wife. She wanted to go a fancy restaurant in near city.
Arrived there was empty, beautiful place with excellent food but expensive. However the waiters were slow, everything took time. In the time to close the bill it was the big confusion, order written wrong, unreal discounts. I don't go there anynmore.


Este fim de semana foi aniversário da minha esposa, ela quis ir em um jantar em um restaurante chique em uma cidade próxima.
Chegamos lá estava vazio, lugar lindo, comida excelente, mas cara, contudo, os garçons eram muito lentos, tudo demorava. E na hora de fechar a conta foi uma enorme confusão, pedidos anotados errados descontos surreais. Não volto mais lá.

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Fancy restaurant

The last weekend was the birthday of my wife.my wife's birthday

its not liekl spanish grammar

She wanted to go a fancy restaurant in nearthe center of the city.?

what?

Arrived thereWhen we arrived, it was empty, and beautiful place with excellent food but, but the food was excellent, although expensive.

However the waiters were slow, everything took time. to make.

In the time to closeWhen the bill came, it was the big confusion, orderfrustrating because orders were written wrong, unreal discounts.

I don't want to go there anynmore.

The lLast weekend was the birthday of my wife.my wife's birthday

People will understand you the way you've written it but it doesn't sound natural.

She wanted to go a fancy restaurant in the city or near the city.

Pick either in the or near the

AWe arrived there but it was empty,. It is a beautiful place with excellent food but expensive.

You could also say when we arrived, it was empty. The place was beautiful with excellent but expensive food. This way might sound more natural.

In the time to close the bill it was the bigWhen we got the check/bill, there was a lot of confusion,. The order written wrong, unreal discounts.as wrong and ?

I don't understand what you're trying to say with "unreal discounts".

I d/We won't go there anynmoregain.

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I understood most everything you wrote but rearranged the words to make it flow better and sound more natural. Good job!

The last weekend was the birthday of my wifemy wife's birthday.

She wanted to go a fancy restaurant in nearby the city.

AWhen we arrived ithere was empty,. It was a beautiful place with excellent food, but expensive.

However the waiters were slow, and everything took a long time.

if you want to bring out the negative then you need to give an adjective of some sort.

In theWhen it was time to closeut the bill itcheck, there was thea big confusion, ordermishap written wrong, unreal discountsh the receipt.

I don't know what you mean by discounts because those are generally a good thing.

I don'tecided not to go there anynmore.

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Lucas_lab2

Sept. 10, 2025

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Thanks. The check had a final value smaller than it should have, it was incorrect.

Fancy restaurant

The last weekend was the birthday of my wifemy wife's birthday.

She wanted to go to a fancy restaurant in the nearby city.

AWe arrived there and it was empty,. It was beautiful place with excellent food, but was very expensive.

However the waiters were slow, everything took tima while.

In theWhen it was time to closepay the bill it was the bigthere was a lot of confusion,. The order was written wrong, unrealincorrect discounts.

I don't go there anynmore.

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Great job! I totally understood what you meant to say with each sentence. As you continue to practice, you'll gain more familiarity with English sentence structure. Keep working!

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Lucas_lab2

Sept. 10, 2025

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Thanks

However the waiters were slow, everything took time.


However the waiters were slow, everything took tima while.

However the waiters were slow, and everything took a long time.

if you want to bring out the negative then you need to give an adjective of some sort.

However the waiters were slow, everything took time. to make.

In the time to close the bill it was the big confusion, order written wrong, unreal discounts.


In theWhen it was time to closepay the bill it was the bigthere was a lot of confusion,. The order was written wrong, unrealincorrect discounts.

In theWhen it was time to closeut the bill itcheck, there was thea big confusion, ordermishap written wrong, unreal discountsh the receipt.

I don't know what you mean by discounts because those are generally a good thing.

In the time to close the bill it was the bigWhen we got the check/bill, there was a lot of confusion,. The order written wrong, unreal discounts.as wrong and ?

I don't understand what you're trying to say with "unreal discounts".

In the time to closeWhen the bill came, it was the big confusion, orderfrustrating because orders were written wrong, unreal discounts.

I don't go there anynmore.


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I don'tecided not to go there anynmore.

I d/We won't go there anynmoregain.

I don't want to go there anynmore.

Fancy restaurant


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The last weekend was the birthday of my wife.


The last weekend was the birthday of my wifemy wife's birthday.

The last weekend was the birthday of my wifemy wife's birthday.

The lLast weekend was the birthday of my wife.my wife's birthday

People will understand you the way you've written it but it doesn't sound natural.

The last weekend was the birthday of my wife.my wife's birthday

its not liekl spanish grammar

She wanted to go a fancy restaurant in near city.


She wanted to go to a fancy restaurant in the nearby city.

She wanted to go a fancy restaurant in nearby the city.

She wanted to go a fancy restaurant in the city or near the city.

Pick either in the or near the

She wanted to go a fancy restaurant in nearthe center of the city.?

what?

Arrived there was empty, beautiful place with excellent food but expensive.


AWe arrived there and it was empty,. It was beautiful place with excellent food, but was very expensive.

AWhen we arrived ithere was empty,. It was a beautiful place with excellent food, but expensive.

AWe arrived there but it was empty,. It is a beautiful place with excellent food but expensive.

You could also say when we arrived, it was empty. The place was beautiful with excellent but expensive food. This way might sound more natural.

Arrived thereWhen we arrived, it was empty, and beautiful place with excellent food but, but the food was excellent, although expensive.

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