April 3, 2021
Family
My family and I have been living in a house since I can remember. More concretely, we are living in a village in the eastern part of the Czech Republic. My girlfriend and I have renovated two rooms on the ground floor that we currently live in. We changed all the furniture, painted the walls, and even changed the ceiling lamp. On the first floor live my older brother and my mom with her boyfriend.
As the spring is beginning, we are starting to be active in our yard and garden. We are cleaning old useless things lying around for many years now, and finally, they'll see their end. Even our greenhouse has already seen some life after winter. I planted some lettuce in there. Once they grow up, chili peppers will take their place.
Family
My family and I have been living in a house sincefor as long as I can remember.
More concretely, we are livinglive in a village in the eastern part of the Czech Republic.
sounds more natural
My girlfriend and I have renovated two rooms on the ground floor that we currently live in.
We changed all the furniture, painted the walls, and even changed the ceiling lamp.
On the first floor live my older brother and my mom with her boyfriend.
As the spring is beginning, we are starting to be active in our yard and garden.
We are cleaningthrowing away old useless things lying around for many years now, and finally, they'll see their end.
I'm assuming what you meant here is that you're getting rid of old stuff that you don't need anymore. If you say "cleaning" it sounds as if you're, well, cleaning said stuff and you intend to use them.
Even our greenhouse has already seen some life after winter.
I planted some lettuce in there.
Once they grow up, chili peppers will take their place.
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very good!
April 3, 2021
Fantastic! Thank you! You are right, I didn't realize that we aren't cleaning them but indeed throwing them away.
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My family and I have been living in a house since I can remember. My family and I have been living in a house |
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More concretely, we are living in a village in the eastern part of the Czech Republic. More concretely, we sounds more natural |
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We are cleaning old useless things lying around for many years now, and finally, they'll see their end. We are I'm assuming what you meant here is that you're getting rid of old stuff that you don't need anymore. If you say "cleaning" it sounds as if you're, well, cleaning said stuff and you intend to use them. |
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Even our greenhouse has already seen some life after winter. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I planted some lettuce in there. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Once they grow up, chili peppers will take their place. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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