Failure? Maybe it's a new start

Good evening, greetings from Teresa,i. It's 10 minutes to 10. It's in the middle of June,h. Half of this year haves passed. I'm writing down something on this platform to make a brief summary ofor the past half year. Actually, I haven't done this for years.Just something happens The otheser days,I observed, I saw one of my friend's blog, where something abouthe has recorded his work and study life as well as his viewpoints were recorded from 2019 to 2023. After browsing his blogs,it astonishes me that, his persistence ofin acquiring new knowledge acquisition along with his summary habits,though hstonished me, as well as what kind of habits he uses. He seldom shares his life inton WeChat moments. I should learn these good habits from him,a. A voice comes within myto mind. And then I started writing something...

1) You should put a space after each full stop and comma
2) I'm writing down something on this platform to make a brief summary of the past half year. -> Something like "I'm going to write a brief summary of the past half year on this website" would sound more natural
3) The other day, I saw one of my friend's blog, where he has recorded his work and study life as well as his viewpoints from 2019 to 2023. -> You can also say "where he has written about his work and study life as well as his viewpoints from 2019 to 2023.
4) A voice comes to mind. And then I started writing something... -> I wasn't sure what you were trying to say here

OIn March,I got the information I received news that I'ved passed the written examination part of the teacher qualification certificate , which is the biggest reward in the past half year. Then I went to Wuhan and spent one week there, looking for some job opportunities,f. Finally, two foreign trade companies invited me to thean interview, but I turned them down. Staying in the hotel was boring,. I decided to go out for city-walka walk in the city along the crowded street and take a look around some parks, where the cheerry blossoms were cblooming out. Though I've been in this city for 4 years,. I've never went cycling along the East Lake untill I graduation,whiched. It's an activity I've wannated to try for a long time. So, on a sunny day I did it,s. Spending somea few hours there made my day. The only pity is that I don't live there, otherwise I could ridinge my bicycle along the East Lake frequently. The last night before I went back home, I went to take a ferry,t. The ship were throngas crowded with passengers, so I could hardly watchedsee the sights along river. Fortunately, after going ashore, I could appreciate the night scene on a high platform and there were many travelers are taking photos. The river breeze was pleasant. That week made me relaxed from the inside.

1) Instead of 'reward', I would use the word 'achievement': which is my biggest achievement
2) So, on a sunny day I did it -> I feel it would be more natural to say something like "So, one day when it was sunny, I went for it."
3) That week made me relaxed from the inside. -> I would say something like "I felt relaxed on the inside after that week."

Since I comeing back home tillin the middle of May, I have been preparing for mythe interview part of the teacher qualification certificate. It was my first time to participateing in the interview,. I couldn't overcome the tension. As I comewent into the classroom,nothing but blank in my mind.Only 20 minutes for the whole interview,w my mind was blank. The whole interview took only 20 minutes. When it was completed, I know theew I would get a bad result.

1) I couldn't overcome the tension. -> It would be more natural to say "I was very nervous"

As I expected, I doidn't pass the interview.

Preparation review: The lesson I drowpart I did badly in was vocabulary class,i. It was easy actually, but I couldn't think of anything at that time. On the other hand, I focused on reading and writing lesson, paying little attention to vocabulary and listening& and speaking. I didn't make a specific plan for each typearea of lesson's exercise,arning, which leadsd to the lack of key partskills when I attended the interview.

What's more, some terms mistakes happenI made mistakes with some of the terms I used during my interview.

It's too late today,s. So much for this,I I'm gonna sleep now.

"Gonna" is a casual term. "I'm going to sleep now" would be the full correct way to write it