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zanyzoe

Nov. 12, 2025

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Exercise

-Create a story with the following words: aloofness, utter, deceive, to wander, hatred, franckly, to waste, seek, thoughtless, spring, indolent and rather.-

When I was younger, I met a lonely and indolent man!
His aloofness made him frankly thoughtless.
In reality, he was rather shy but his behaviour deceived us.
Some people thought he had hatred for them because he spoke with no one.
He is wasted his time to wander on his garden and if someone tried to talk to him, he was springing and uttered strange noises.

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Exercise

-Create a story with the following words: aloofness, utter, deceive, to wander, hatred, franckly, to waste, seek, thoughtless, spring, indolent and rather.-

When I was younger, I met a lonely and indolent man!

His aloofness frankly made him frankly thoughtless.

This word order is more natural

In reality, he was rather shy but his behaviour deceived us.

Some people thought he hadit was because of his hatred for them becausethat he spoke with no one.

He is wasted his time to wander oing in his garden and if someone tried to talk to him, he wasould springing up and uttered strange noises.

I know you had to use the word "spring" here but I would probably say "jump up" in this case

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zanyzoe

Nov. 20, 2025

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Thank you! :)

Exercise

-Create a story with the following words: aloofness, utter, deceive, to wander, hatred, franckly, to waste, seek, thoughtless, spring, indolent and rather.-

When I was younger, I met a lonely and indolent man!

His aloofness made him frankly thoughtless.

In reality, he was rather shy but his behaviour deceived us.

Some people thought he had hatred for them because he spoke with no one.

He is wasted his time to wander oing in his garden, and if someone tried to talk to him, he was springisprang and uttered strange noises.

double check your tenses

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this is brilliant! well done :)

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zanyzoe

Nov. 13, 2025

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Ooooh thank you !!!

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-Create a story with the following words: aloofness, utter, deceive, to wander, hatred, franckly, to waste, seek, thoughtless, spring, indolent and rather.-


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

-Create a story with the following words: aloofness, utter, deceive, to wander, hatred, franckly, to waste, seek, thoughtless, spring, indolent and rather.-

When I was younger, I met an lonely and indolent man!


His aloofness made him frankly thoughtless.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

His aloofness frankly made him frankly thoughtless.

This word order is more natural

In reality, he was rather shy but his behaviour deceived us.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Some people thought he had hatred for them because he spoke with no one.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Some people thought he hadit was because of his hatred for them becausethat he spoke with no one.

He is wasted his time to wander on his garden and if someone tried to talk to him, he was springing and uttered strange noises.


He is wasted his time to wander oing in his garden, and if someone tried to talk to him, he was springisprang and uttered strange noises.

double check your tenses

He is wasted his time to wander oing in his garden and if someone tried to talk to him, he wasould springing up and uttered strange noises.

I know you had to use the word "spring" here but I would probably say "jump up" in this case

When I was younger, I met a lonely and indolent man!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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