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SummerTeaWater

April 5, 2021

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Evening Routines

Before going to bed, I have three routines to go.

First of all, I am writing an English journal in here.
This is the only one practice that output training of English.
Actually, I have to speak more and more, but it is very hard without any friend who can speak well.
Without writing the journal, there is no chance to use English.

The other one is to transcribe a sentence that is from a book or a speech.
When I copy a sentence, I re-think about the real meaning and I am able to remember the sentence.

The last and my favorite routine is drawing a picture.
I am not good at drawing, but it is helpful to express my emotions that aren't possible to write.

With these routines, I can release my stresses and have a good dream.

Corrections

Before going to bed, I have three routines to go.steps in my routine.

This sounds more native.

First of all, I amThe first step is writinge and English journal inentry here.

Since it’s a night routine it’s better to write it as steps.

This is the only oneway I can practice that output training of English. Or This is one of the only ways I can practice output training ofor English.

I corrected the first sentence, and put another option.

Actually, I have to speak more andpractice speaking more , but it is very hard without any friend who can speak well.

This is a more simple way to say it. Also sounds more native

Without writing thea journal, there isI have no chance to use English.

This sounds more natural

The other one is to transcribe a sentence that is from a book or a speech.

When I copy a sentence, I re-think about the real meaning and I am able to remember the sentence.

The last and my favorite thing in. routine is drawing. I draw a picture.

Sounds native

With these routines, I can release my stresse and have a good dream. Or With these routine, I can release my stress and have a good dream.s

Routine is already plural and stress is too.

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Evening Routines

Before going to bed, I havego through a three-part routines to go.

First of all, I am writinge an English journal in here.

Thisat is the only onetime I practice that output training of English output.

Actually, I have to speaktry to speak English more and more, but it is very hard without any friends who can speak it well.

Without writing thIf I don't write journals, there isI have no chance to use English.

The other onext part of my routine is to transcribe aing sentence that is from a books or a speeches.

When I copy a sentence, I re-think about the real meaning again and I am able to remember the sentence.

The last andpart of my routine, which is my favorite routinepart, is drawing a pictures.

I am not good at drawing, but it is helpful tos me express my emotions that aren't possible hard to write down.

With theseis routines, I can release my stresses and have a good dreams.

SummerTeaWater's avatar
SummerTeaWater

April 5, 2021

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Thank you very much about your correction!

Evening Routines


Evening Routines

Before going to bed, I have three routines to go.


Before going to bed, I havego through a three-part routines to go.

Before going to bed, I have three routines to go.steps in my routine.

This sounds more native.

First of all, I am writing an English journal in here.


First of all, I am writinge an English journal in here.

First of all, I amThe first step is writinge and English journal inentry here.

Since it’s a night routine it’s better to write it as steps.

This is the only one practice that output training of English.


Thisat is the only onetime I practice that output training of English output.

This is the only oneway I can practice that output training of English. Or This is one of the only ways I can practice output training ofor English.

I corrected the first sentence, and put another option.

Actually, I have to speak more and more, but it is very hard without any friend who can speak well.


Actually, I have to speaktry to speak English more and more, but it is very hard without any friends who can speak it well.

Actually, I have to speak more andpractice speaking more , but it is very hard without any friend who can speak well.

This is a more simple way to say it. Also sounds more native

Without writing the journal, there is no chance to use English.


Without writing thIf I don't write journals, there isI have no chance to use English.

Without writing thea journal, there isI have no chance to use English.

This sounds more natural

The other one is to transcribe a sentence that is from a book or a speech.


The other onext part of my routine is to transcribe aing sentence that is from a books or a speeches.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When I copy a sentence, I re-think about the real meaning and I am able to remember the sentence.


When I copy a sentence, I re-think about the real meaning again and I am able to remember the sentence.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The last and my favorite routine is drawing a picture.


The last andpart of my routine, which is my favorite routinepart, is drawing a pictures.

The last and my favorite thing in. routine is drawing. I draw a picture.

Sounds native

I am not good at drawing, but it is helpful to express my emotions that aren't possible to write.


I am not good at drawing, but it is helpful tos me express my emotions that aren't possible hard to write down.

With these routines, I can release my stresses and have a good dream.


With theseis routines, I can release my stresses and have a good dreams.

With these routines, I can release my stresse and have a good dream. Or With these routine, I can release my stress and have a good dream.s

Routine is already plural and stress is too.

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