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Lucas_lab2

Sept. 23, 2025

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Europe intinerary.

I'm saving money for travel to Europe and I am thinking about the Europe intinerary. I want meet Paris, Rome, Switzerland, Greece, United Kingdom, Barcelona... So many countries that I don't know if I can will visit all there and some of them are so far each other for a trip with ten days. The plane tickets to Madrid is cheaper but maybe, arrive in Paris and follow to Switzerland and Italy will be more profitable. What do you recommend?


Estou juntando dinheiro para viajar para a Europa e estava pensando no roteiro. Quero conhecer Paris, Roma, suiça, grecia, reino unido, barcelona... São tantos lugares que acho que não vou conseguir passar em todos e alguns são bem distantes um do outro para uma viagem de 10 dias. As passagens para Madrid são mais baratas, mas talvez chegar em Paris e seguir para suiça e Italia seja mais proveitoso. O que me recomendam?

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Europe inItinerary.

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I'm saving money forto travel to Europe, and I am thinking about the Europemy intinerary.

I want meeto visit Paris, Rome, Switzerland, Greece, the United Kingdom, and Barcelona...

So many countries that I don't know if I can will visit all there and sI'm not sure if I will have time to visit all of them. Some of them are stoo far each other for a trip withapart to visit in ten days.

The pPlane tickets to Madrid isare cheaper, but maybe, arriveing in Paris and followthen traveling to Switzerland and Italy willcould be more profitablcost-effective.

What do you recommend?

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Don't let lots of mistakes discourage you. That's how you learn! Good job and keep going!

I recommend flying into wherever is cheapest because travel within Europe is relatively inexpensive via train or bus once you are on the mainland.

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Lucas_lab2

Sept. 25, 2025

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Thank you, I will consider that

Europe intinerary.

I'm saving money for travelling to Europe and I am thinking about the Europe intinerary.

Either "for travelling to Europe" or "to travel to Europe" would be correct

I want mto seet Paris, Rome, Switzerland, Greece, United Kingdom, Barcelona...

You meet people, and see (or visit) places.

So many countries that I don't know if I can will visit all there, and some of them are so far from each other for a trip with ten days.

"A trip with ten days" is not wrong, but maybe "a ten-day trip" sounds more natural.

The plane tickets to Madrid is cheaper but maybe, arriveing in Paris and followcontinuing to Switzerland and Italy will be more profitable.

What do you recommend?

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It's overall good and very understandable! Just minor corrections :)

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Lucas_lab2

Sept. 25, 2025

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thanks

Europe intinerary.


Europe intinerary.

Europe inItinerary.

Capitalize titles

I'm saving money for travel to Europe and I am thinking about the Europe intinerary.


I'm saving money for travelling to Europe and I am thinking about the Europe intinerary.

Either "for travelling to Europe" or "to travel to Europe" would be correct

I'm saving money forto travel to Europe, and I am thinking about the Europemy intinerary.

I want meet Paris, Rome, Switzerland, Greece, United Kingdom, Barcelona...


I want mto seet Paris, Rome, Switzerland, Greece, United Kingdom, Barcelona...

You meet people, and see (or visit) places.

I want meeto visit Paris, Rome, Switzerland, Greece, the United Kingdom, and Barcelona...

So many countries that I don't know if I can will visit all there and some of them are so far each other for a trip with ten days.


So many countries that I don't know if I can will visit all there, and some of them are so far from each other for a trip with ten days.

"A trip with ten days" is not wrong, but maybe "a ten-day trip" sounds more natural.

So many countries that I don't know if I can will visit all there and sI'm not sure if I will have time to visit all of them. Some of them are stoo far each other for a trip withapart to visit in ten days.

The plane tickets to Madrid is cheaper but maybe, arrive in Paris and follow to Switzerland and Italy will be more profitable.


The plane tickets to Madrid is cheaper but maybe, arriveing in Paris and followcontinuing to Switzerland and Italy will be more profitable.

The pPlane tickets to Madrid isare cheaper, but maybe, arriveing in Paris and followthen traveling to Switzerland and Italy willcould be more profitablcost-effective.

What do you recommend?


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