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Nov. 1, 2025

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Enviroment

Our ancestors enviroment does not is the same as nowadays. The main reason? Actually we both know. The issues are not from yesterday. But how about the solving of these problems? Where are they? Nowhere? Incorrect. We inherited this world from our ancestors. Perhaps the people, me and you do not take care in the same way as it needs. So, we all are the guilty? Not correctly. Because the people who more pollute are those who have more money. Figure with me, rich people have more money to spend. On the another side, those are the people who have more money to be consumist. Being consumist they buy stuff that are not necessary. So, a couple weeks later they throw that away. So you think that these rich people are just a minority piece in the Earth and would be necessary more than that to arrive in pollution that we are today. Even though, when more people buy, more people produce and much more. Producing a bunch of produts create more pollution. Consequently, more green house effect and more rising temperatures. And that is why you are reading this and sweating.

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Our ancestors' environment doeis not is the same as our environment nowadays.

The main reason?

Actually, we both know the reason.

These issues awere not farom yesterdayund in the past.

This is my best guess at what you meant to write.

But, how about the solving ofution to these problems?

Where are they?

Nowhere?

Incorrect.

We inherited this world from our ancestors.

Perhaps the people, like me and you doare not takeing care inof the samenvironment in the way as it needs to be.

So, are we all are the guilty?

Not correexactly.

Because tThe people who more pollute aremore are often those who have more money.

Figure with me,Consider that rich people have more money to spend.

On the another side, thoThese are the people who have more money to be consumisters.

Being consumist tThey buy stuff that are not actually necessary.

SoAfter, say, a couple of weeks later, they throw that away.

So yYou think that these rich people are justonly a minority piece in theis Earth, and would be necessary more than that to arrive inmore than the current number are needed to result in the pollution that we arnow have today.

Even thoughHowever, when more people buy stuff, more people also produce and much morestuff.

Producing a bunch of products creates more pollution.

Consequently, morwe have the green house effect and morecontinually rising temperatures.

And tThat is why you are reading this and sweating.

Environment

Our ancestors's environment doeis not is the same as nowadays.

The main reason?

Actually we both know.

The issues are not from yesterday.

I'm not quite sure what you mean here.

But how about the solving of these problems?

Where are they?

Nowhere?

Incorrect.

We inherited this world from our ancestors.

So, we all are the guilty?

Not correctly.

Because the people who more pollute more are those who have more money.

FigureThink through it with me, rich people have more money to spend.

On the another side, those are the people who have more money to be consumerist.

Being consumerist, they buy stuff that areis not necessary.

stuff = uncountable, so it uses "is"
But you could also say "they buy things that are not necessary."

So, a couple weeks later they throw thait away.

So you think that these rich people are just a minority piece ion the Earth and would be necessary more than that to arrive in pollution that we are today.

I think you are trying to say something like: So you think that these rich people are just a minority on the Earth and can't have resulted in the level of pollution that we have today.
Or more naturally: So you think that there aren't enough rich people to have resulted in the level of pollution that we have today.

Even though, when more people buy, more people produce and much more.

Producing a bunch of products creates more pollution.

Consequently, more green house effect and more rising temperatures.

And that is why you are reading this and sweating.

Feedback

I agree that consumerism causes a lot of problems with the world today! This is a complex topic. There are a couple areas where your words are not very clear, but overall I understood what you wanted to say. Keep writing!

Enviroment


Environment

Our ancestors enviroment does not is the same as nowadays.


Our ancestors's environment doeis not is the same as nowadays.

Our ancestors' environment doeis not is the same as our environment nowadays.

The main reason?


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Actually we both know.


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Actually, we both know the reason.

The issues are not from yesterday.


The issues are not from yesterday.

I'm not quite sure what you mean here.

These issues awere not farom yesterdayund in the past.

This is my best guess at what you meant to write.

But how about the solving of these problems?


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But, how about the solving ofution to these problems?

Where are they?


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Nowhere?


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Incorrect.


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We inherited this world from our ancestors.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Perhaps the people, me and you do not take care in the same way as it needs.


Perhaps the people, like me and you doare not takeing care inof the samenvironment in the way as it needs to be.

So, we all are the guilty?


So, we all are the guilty?

So, are we all are the guilty?

Not correctly.


Not correctly.

Not correexactly.

Because the people who more pollute are those who have more money.


Because the people who more pollute more are those who have more money.

Because tThe people who more pollute aremore are often those who have more money.

Figure with me, rich people have more money to spend.


FigureThink through it with me, rich people have more money to spend.

Figure with me,Consider that rich people have more money to spend.

On the another side, those are the people who have more money to be consumist.


On the another side, those are the people who have more money to be consumerist.

On the another side, thoThese are the people who have more money to be consumisters.

Being consumist they buy stuff that are not necessary.


Being consumerist, they buy stuff that areis not necessary.

stuff = uncountable, so it uses "is" But you could also say "they buy things that are not necessary."

Being consumist tThey buy stuff that are not actually necessary.

So, a couple weeks later they throw that away.


So, a couple weeks later they throw thait away.

SoAfter, say, a couple of weeks later, they throw that away.

So you think that these rich people are just a minority piece in the Earth and would be necessary more than that to arrive in pollution that we are today.


So you think that these rich people are just a minority piece ion the Earth and would be necessary more than that to arrive in pollution that we are today.

I think you are trying to say something like: So you think that these rich people are just a minority on the Earth and can't have resulted in the level of pollution that we have today. Or more naturally: So you think that there aren't enough rich people to have resulted in the level of pollution that we have today.

So yYou think that these rich people are justonly a minority piece in theis Earth, and would be necessary more than that to arrive inmore than the current number are needed to result in the pollution that we arnow have today.

Even though, when more people buy, more people produce and much more.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Even thoughHowever, when more people buy stuff, more people also produce and much morestuff.

Producing a bunch of produts create more pollution.


Producing a bunch of products creates more pollution.

Producing a bunch of products creates more pollution.

Consequently, more green house effect and more rising temperatures.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Consequently, morwe have the green house effect and morecontinually rising temperatures.

And that is why you are reading this and sweating.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

And tThat is why you are reading this and sweating.

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