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kaju

Feb. 5, 2025

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English study for rainy day.

I'm trying to use this website for diary the first time today. I was so sleepy all day today cuz this week I went to too much hangout at night . And yesterday I met some people who first time I met, and talking about bit difficult things. So, my brain exhausted.
for me, English practice is kind of like meditation. So now my mental feels relaxing and kind of like go to another place. second language bring me out to another place.
Outside getting rainy, so I realized why I am so sleepy


今日初めてこのサイトを日記を書くのに使ってみている。今週は夜遊びに行きすぎたので、今日は一日中眠かった。それに昨日は初めて会う人たちとちょっと難しい話をしたので、脳が疲れすぎてる感じがする。
私にとって英語を練習するのはメディテーションに似ている。だから今はリラックスしていて、別の場所に行ったみたいな気分。第二言語は私を別の場所に連れて行ってくれる。
外は雨が降りはじめて、だから眠いんだなと思った。

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I'm trying to use this website foras a diary for the first time today.

I was so sleepy all day today cuz this week I went to too much hangout at nightthe entire day today, because I hungout at night too much this week .

And yesterday I met some people whofor the first time I met, and talkingwho talked a bit about bit difficult things.

So, my brain was exhausted.

Alternate: So, I was mentally exhausted.

fFor me, English practice is kind of like meditation.

So now, my mentalind feels relaxinged and kind of likeI want to go to another place.

A second language brings me out to another place.

Outside getIt's starting to rainy, so outside. I realized, so that's why I am so sleepy.

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Good job! Keep on doing your best learning English!

English study for a rainy day.

I'm trying to use this website foras a diary for the first time today.

I was so sleepy all day today cuz this week I went to too much hangout at night .out with my friends in the evening a lot.

And yesterday I met some new people who first time I met, and talkinged about bitsome difficult things.

So, my brain I am mentally exhausted.

fFor me, English practice is kind of like meditation.

So now my mentalind feels relaxinged and I would kind of like to go to another placsomewhere.

Practicing a second language bring me out to anothertakes me to different place.

You could add 'in my mind' if the place isn't real. Or 'Practicing a second language puts me in a different mental state'.

Outside getIt's starting to rainy, so outside and I realized why I am so sleepy.

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Amazing writing! :)

Today for the first time I'm trying to useout this website for my diary the first time today.

I was so sleepy all day today cuzbecause this week I went tout too much hangoutoften at night .

"Cuz" is internet slang and not used in formal writing.

And yYesterday I met some people whofor the first time I met, and, but they were talking about bit difficult thingopics.

In a prompt, its helpful to explain a bit further if you mention that they discussed "difficult" or "controversial" topics.

So, my brain exhausted.

fFor me, English practice is kind of like meditation.

Make sure the sentence starts with a capitalized letter.

So now my mental feels relaxinged and I kind of like go to another place.

Be careful not to include filler words like "like" in a written statement.

A second language brings me out to another place mentally.

Outside gettingis rainy, sothat's when I realized why I am so sleepy.

Be careful about punctuation. Also its unclear what the association is between the weather outside and feeling sleepy.

English study for rainy day.


English study for a rainy day.

I'm trying to use this website for diary the first time today.


Today for the first time I'm trying to useout this website for my diary the first time today.

I'm trying to use this website foras a diary for the first time today.

I'm trying to use this website foras a diary for the first time today.

I was so sleepy all day today cuz this week I went to too much hangout at night .


I was so sleepy all day today cuzbecause this week I went tout too much hangoutoften at night .

"Cuz" is internet slang and not used in formal writing.

I was so sleepy all day today cuz this week I went to too much hangout at night .out with my friends in the evening a lot.

I was so sleepy all day today cuz this week I went to too much hangout at nightthe entire day today, because I hungout at night too much this week .

And yesterday I met some people who first time I met, and talking about bit difficult things.


And yYesterday I met some people whofor the first time I met, and, but they were talking about bit difficult thingopics.

In a prompt, its helpful to explain a bit further if you mention that they discussed "difficult" or "controversial" topics.

And yesterday I met some new people who first time I met, and talkinged about bitsome difficult things.

And yesterday I met some people whofor the first time I met, and talkingwho talked a bit about bit difficult things.

So, my brain exhausted.


So, my brain exhausted.

So, my brain I am mentally exhausted.

So, my brain was exhausted.

Alternate: So, I was mentally exhausted.

for me, English practice is kind of like meditation.


fFor me, English practice is kind of like meditation.

Make sure the sentence starts with a capitalized letter.

fFor me, English practice is kind of like meditation.

fFor me, English practice is kind of like meditation.

So now my mental feels relaxing and kind of like go to another place.


So now my mental feels relaxinged and I kind of like go to another place.

Be careful not to include filler words like "like" in a written statement.

So now my mentalind feels relaxinged and I would kind of like to go to another placsomewhere.

So now, my mentalind feels relaxinged and kind of likeI want to go to another place.

second language bring me out to another place.


A second language brings me out to another place mentally.

Practicing a second language bring me out to anothertakes me to different place.

You could add 'in my mind' if the place isn't real. Or 'Practicing a second language puts me in a different mental state'.

A second language brings me out to another place.

Outside getting rainy, so I realized why I am so sleepy


Outside gettingis rainy, sothat's when I realized why I am so sleepy.

Be careful about punctuation. Also its unclear what the association is between the weather outside and feeling sleepy.

Outside getIt's starting to rainy, so outside and I realized why I am so sleepy.

Outside getIt's starting to rainy, so outside. I realized, so that's why I am so sleepy.

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