April 11, 2021
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This observational study involved 340 women with breast cancer receiving therapy at the “Department of Radiotherapy Oncology of San Gaetano Nuclear Medicine Centre” in Bagheria, from 2016 to 2020.
This study aimed at highlighting how the constant participation in screening programmes improves the prognostic factors of cancer disease and vice versa how the lack of participation to them makes the prognosis worse, taking into account also the importance of intervening factors, defined as bio-psycho-social (medical, psychological, socio-demographic-cultural, related to lifestyle).
Specifically, the study showed that in order to really deal with health, in terms of protection, prevention and promotion, we need to take an interest in biopsychosocial processes related to it and it is also necessary to contextualize the issue within the psychosocial environment, through a systemic approach.
At last, doing this, it will be possible to develop a good health culture and it is expected that secondary prevention interventions, early diagnosis of cancer in general and breast cancer in particular will increase.
English article
Could you please correct this text?
This observational study involved 340 women with breast cancer receiving therapy at the “Department of Radiotherapy Oncology of San Gaetano Nuclear Medicine Centre” in Bagheria, from 2016 to 2020.
This study aimed at highlighting how the constant participation in screening programmes improves the prognostic factors of cancer disease, and vice -versa how the lack of participation to them makes thea prognosis worse, taking into account also the importance of intervening factors, defined as bio-psycho-social (medical, psychological, socio-demographic-cultural, and those related to lifestyle).
The word "constant", which means "continuous, ongoing" may not be the best choice in this situation. The word "consistent", meaning "highly regular, without exceptions", may be a better choice.
Specifically, the study showed that in order to realeffectively deal with health, in terms of protection, prevention and promotion, we need to take an interest in biopsychosocial processes related to it and i. It is also necessary to contextualize the issue within the psychosocial environment, through a systemic approach.
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This observational study involved 340 women with breast cancer receiving therapy at the “Department of Radiotherapy Oncology of San Gaetano Nuclear Medicine Centre” in Bagheria, from 2016 to 2020. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This study aimed at highlighting how the constant participation in screening programmes improves the prognostic factors of cancer disease and vice versa how the lack of participation to them makes the prognosis worse, taking into account also the importance of intervening factors, defined as bio-psycho-social (medical, psychological, socio-demographic-cultural, related to lifestyle). This study aimed at highlighting how The word "constant", which means "continuous, ongoing" may not be the best choice in this situation. The word "consistent", meaning "highly regular, without exceptions", may be a better choice. |
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Specifically, the study showed that in order to really deal with health, in terms of protection, prevention and promotion, we need to take an interest in biopsychosocial processes related to it and it is also necessary to contextualize the issue within the psychosocial environment, through a systemic approach. Specifically, the study showed that in order to Run-on sentence. |
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At last, doing this, it will be possible to develop a good health culture and it is expected that secondary prevention interventions, early diagnosis of cancer in general and breast cancer in particular will increase.
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