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alexmu202333

Oct. 27, 2025

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email reply for dancing class

Hi Drew,

Me too! I am so excited to our dance classes! I prefer the ballet dance becuase I've been watching some videos related to that for a while and it looks beautiful!
And don't worry about your current fitness, I will get in good shape after this dance class.
Regarding my availability, unfortunately I have a meeting tomorrow evening, but I will be available tonight. Feel free to call me when you have time.,

Best,
A

Corrections

I am so excited tofor our dance classes!

I prefer the ballet dance becuause

I've been watching some videos related to thait for a while and it looks beautiful!

This isn't a totally incorrect sentence, but I think "it" sounds a little more natural.

And don't worry about your current fitness, I will get in good shape after this dance class.

You swap between "you" and "I" in this sentence - is Drew worried about *your* fitness or *his* fitness?

Feel free to call me when you have time.,

Me too!Delete

I am so excited tofor our dance classes!

I prefer the ballet dance becuause

I've been watching some videos related to that for a while and it looks beautiful!

And dDon't worry about your current fitness, I. You will get in good shape after this dance class.

Regarding my availability, uUnfortunately I have a meeting tomorrow evening, but I will be available tonight.

Feel free to call me when you have time.,

I am so excited tofor our dance classes!

I prefer the ballet dance becuause

And don't worry about myour current fitness, I will get in good shape after this dance class.

Seems a bit weird to tell someone else not to worry about their fitness because you're going to improve yours. Probably both clauses should be "I" or both clauses should be "you"

Feel free to call me when you have time.,

You don't need a comma because you already have a full stop

email reply for dancing class


Hi Drew,


Me too!


Me too!Delete

I am so excited to our dance classes!


I am so excited tofor our dance classes!

I am so excited tofor our dance classes!

I am so excited tofor our dance classes!

I prefer the ballet dance becuase


I prefer the ballet dance becuause

I prefer the ballet dance becuause

I prefer the ballet dance becuause

I've been watching some videos related to that for a while and it looks beautiful!


I've been watching some videos related to that for a while and it looks beautiful!

I've been watching some videos related to thait for a while and it looks beautiful!

This isn't a totally incorrect sentence, but I think "it" sounds a little more natural.

And don't worry about your current fitness, I will get in good shape after this dance class.


And don't worry about myour current fitness, I will get in good shape after this dance class.

Seems a bit weird to tell someone else not to worry about their fitness because you're going to improve yours. Probably both clauses should be "I" or both clauses should be "you"

And dDon't worry about your current fitness, I. You will get in good shape after this dance class.

And don't worry about your current fitness, I will get in good shape after this dance class.

You swap between "you" and "I" in this sentence - is Drew worried about *your* fitness or *his* fitness?

Regarding my availability, unfortunately I have a meeting tomorrow evening, but I will be available tonight.


Regarding my availability, uUnfortunately I have a meeting tomorrow evening, but I will be available tonight.

Feel free to call me when you have time.,


Feel free to call me when you have time.,

You don't need a comma because you already have a full stop

Feel free to call me when you have time.,

Feel free to call me when you have time.,

Best,


A


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