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yssaata

Nov. 17, 2025

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EMAIL - My requested suggestions for team productivity.

Dear Susy,

Thank you for your email. I am glad to help with my suggestions .
Firstly, to improve the produtivity in the office I recommend creating a reward incentive program for all employees who strive to achieve their goals during the month.
Secondly, I propose organizing training sessions to strengthen the team's skiils in performing their duties effeciently.
Finally, I would like to inform you that our monthly meeting has already scheduled for next week and we could announce these possible decisions to everyone if you wish.
I hope these ideas are helpful. Please let me know if you need further information.
Sincerely,
Renata

Corrections

Dear Susy,

Thank you for your email.

I am gladhappy to help with mysome suggestions .

This sentence is good, but it could sound more natural. One usually hears "happy to help" more often, though "glad to help" can certainly be said. Additionally, and it's difficult to explain why, but adding "some" before suggestions softens the phrase. Without it, "with my suggestions" almost sounds overconfident in what you are suggesting.

Firstly, to improve the produtivity in the office I recommend creating a reward incentive program for all employees who strive to achieve their goals during the month.

Secondly, I propose organizing training sessions to strengthen the team's skiills in performing their duties effeiciently.

Spelling errors: "team's skills" and "efficiently"

Finally, I would like to inform you that our monthly meeting has alreadybeen scheduled for next week, and we could announce these possible decisions to everyone if you wish.

Here, the word "already" is not necessary, and should instead be replaced with "been". Additionally, a comma is needed to separate the sentences.

I hope these ideas are helpful.

Please let me know if you need further information.

Sincerely,

Renata

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This is great and very well written. I mostly wanted to suggest some slightly more natural ways of phrasing, with some minor grammar tweaks. Well done.

EMAIL - MyAs requested, my suggestions for team productivity.

The original sentence is fine by grammar rules, but just comes across as a little unnatural in the word choice. I think that's because of the ambiguity between "my requested suggestions" meaning suggestions from you that were requested, or suggestions you requested from someone else.

You can clean up this ambiguity with different phrasing like suggested above.

I am glad to help with my suggestions .

Firstly, to improve the productivity in the office I recommend creating a reward incentive program for all employees who strive to achieve their goals during the month.

Secondly, I propose organizing training sessions to strengthen the team's skiills in performing their duties effeiciently.

Finally, I would like to inform you that our monthly meeting has already been scheduled for next week and we could announce these possible decisions to everyone if you wish.

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yssaata

Nov. 17, 2025

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Thanks so much.

EMAIL - My requested suggestions for team productivity.


EMAIL - MyAs requested, my suggestions for team productivity.

The original sentence is fine by grammar rules, but just comes across as a little unnatural in the word choice. I think that's because of the ambiguity between "my requested suggestions" meaning suggestions from you that were requested, or suggestions you requested from someone else. You can clean up this ambiguity with different phrasing like suggested above.

Dear Susy,


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Thank you for your email.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I am glad to help with my suggestions .


I am glad to help with my suggestions .

I am gladhappy to help with mysome suggestions .

This sentence is good, but it could sound more natural. One usually hears "happy to help" more often, though "glad to help" can certainly be said. Additionally, and it's difficult to explain why, but adding "some" before suggestions softens the phrase. Without it, "with my suggestions" almost sounds overconfident in what you are suggesting.

Firstly, to improve the produtivity in the office I recommend creating a reward incentive program for all employees who strive to achieve their goals during the month.


Firstly, to improve the productivity in the office I recommend creating a reward incentive program for all employees who strive to achieve their goals during the month.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Secondly, I propose organizing training sessions to strengthen the team's skiils in performing their duties effeciently.


Secondly, I propose organizing training sessions to strengthen the team's skiills in performing their duties effeiciently.

Secondly, I propose organizing training sessions to strengthen the team's skiills in performing their duties effeiciently.

Spelling errors: "team's skills" and "efficiently"

Finally, I would like to inform you that our monthly meeting has already scheduled for next week and we could announce these possible decisions to everyone if you wish.


Finally, I would like to inform you that our monthly meeting has already been scheduled for next week and we could announce these possible decisions to everyone if you wish.

Finally, I would like to inform you that our monthly meeting has alreadybeen scheduled for next week, and we could announce these possible decisions to everyone if you wish.

Here, the word "already" is not necessary, and should instead be replaced with "been". Additionally, a comma is needed to separate the sentences.

I hope these ideas are helpful.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Please let me know if you need further information.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Sincerely,


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Renata


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