I live in France, in a Northern France. I live in Northern France.

I live in France, in a Nthe northern Francepart. I live in France, in the northern part.

Or you can just say "I live in Northern France."

My appartement areis in front of a little river, and i'm atI’m on the last floor, so iI have a beautiful view onf the river and the sunset everyday. My apartment is in front of a little river, and I’m on the last floor, so I have a beautiful view of the river and the sunset everyday.

My appartement areis in front of a little river and iI'm aton the last(top/ground) floor, so iI have a beautiful view onf the river and the sunset every day. My apartment is in front of a little river and I'm on the (top/ground) floor, so I have a beautiful view of the river and the sunset every day.

I really love my appartement because it's the first I decorated, and take time for he represent meI took time to represent myself with it. I really love my apartment because it's the first I decorated, and I took time to represent myself with it.

I really love my appartement because it's the first Ione I've decorated and taken time for hto make represent me. I really love my apartment because it's the first one I've decorated and taken time to make represent me.

In my living room i, I have a lot of little things who comes pretty much everywhere, like figurines, handmade paintings, plants, and a disco ball everywhere because they make alook beautiful litgh when the sun tap on itlight comes. In my living room, I have a lot of little things pretty much everywhere, like figurines, handmade paintings, plants, and a disco ball because they look beautiful when the sunlight comes.

In my living room i, I have a lot of little things who comesfrom pretty much everywhere, like figurines, handmade paintings, plants, and disco balls everywhere because they make a beautiful litght when the sun tap on ithits them. In my living room, I have a lot of little things from pretty much everywhere, like figurines, handmade paintings, plants, and disco balls everywhere because they make a beautiful light when the sun hits them.

My kitchen is less decorated, she is every time, she is in disarray (I hate doing the dishes). My kitchen is less decorated, every time, she is in disarray (I hate doing the dishes).

My kitchen is less decorated, she is everytimeeverything is always in disarray (I hate doing the dishes). My kitchen is less decorated, everything is always in disarray (I hate doing the dishes).

With regard to my room i'm, I’m only going onlyto it for sleep, so ilI don't care. With regard to my room, I’m only going to it for sleep, so I don't care.

With regard toAs for my bedroom i'm, I only go ing only for there to sleep so ilI don't care how it looks. As for my bedroom, I only go in there to sleep so I don't care how it looks.

"With regards to" is correct grammar but pretty formal. This is a more casual option you can use.

My living room it's realy mys my most favourites pielace, ithis is where I spend most of my time. My living room is my most favourite place, it is where I spend most of my time.

My living room it's really my favourites piece, this i area. That's where I spend most of my time. My living room is really my favourite area. That's where I spend most of my time.