May 17, 2026
Diary
Today my film and batteries arrived, and I took my first photo on film. I'm so excited!
And it also rained today. I had McDonald's in the evening, and I think McDonald's Sprite is very tasty.
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I had McDonald's in the evening, and I think McDonald'stheir Sprite is very tasty.
I had McDonald's in the evening, and I think their Sprite is very tasty.
You already have McDonald's in the sentence already so we can replace the second one with a pronoun.
And iIt also rained today.
It also rained today.
Finally, I had McDonald's in the evening, and I think McDonald's Sprite is very tasty.
Finally, I had McDonald's in the evening, I think McDonald's Sprite is very tasty.
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Good work :) Remember, sometimes not using "And" so much can make it sound more natural.
May 18, 2026
Thanks!
Diary
Today my film and batteries arrived, and I took my first photo on film.
I'm so excited!
And iIt also rained today.
It also rained today.
I had McDonald's in the evening, and. I think McDonald's Sprite is very tasty.
I had McDonald's in the evening. I think McDonald's Sprite is very tasty.
Also:
I had McDonald's in the evening. I think their Sprite is very tasty.
May 18, 2026
Got it! Thanks!
Diary Diary
Today my film and batteries arrived, and I took my first photo on film.
Today my film and batteries arrived and I took my first photo on film.
I'm so excited!
And it alsolso, it rained today.
Also, it rained today.
I had McDonald's in the evening, and. I think McDonald's Sprite is very tasty.
I had McDonald's in the evening. I think McDonald's Sprite is very tasty.
May 18, 2026
Thanks!
Today my film and batteries arrived, andso I took my first photo on film.
Today my film and batteries arrived, so I took my first photo on film.
'and' is actually correct here as well, I just chose 'so' because it indicates causation.
I'm so excited!
And it also rained today.
I had McDonald's in the evening, and I think McDonald's Sprite is very tasty.
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Great work!
May 18, 2026
Thanks!
Today my film and batteries arrived, and I took my first photo onusing film.
Today my film and batteries arrived, and I took my first photo using film.
I'm so excited!
And it also rained today.
And it rained today.
Otherwise "and" and "also" are doing double duty.
I had McDonald's in the evening, and I think McDonald's Sprite is very tasty.
May 18, 2026
Thanks!!
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Today my film and batteries arrived, and I took my first photo on film.
Today my film and batteries arrived, and I took my first photo
Today my film and batteries arrived, 'and' is actually correct here as well, I just chose 'so' because it indicates causation.
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And it also rained today.
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I had McDonald's in the evening, and I think McDonald's Sprite is very tasty. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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I had McDonald's in the evening Also: I had McDonald's in the evening. I think their Sprite is very tasty.
Finally, I had McDonald's in the evening,
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