June 23, 2021
Earworm
Right now I'm at the office waiting for a meeting. And yes, even behind closed doors I can hear the radio the guard is listening to. It's difficult to make up the meaning, maybe due to how far I am from the guard. Oh yeah, I just heard the tune, it's an old song. I always wondered why, but for some reason Argentinian rock is very popular among older adults in my country, and apparently the guard is also a fan of it. There's a radio signal that plays oldies almost every day, each time you go into any public-service office, there's always the same songs. When you get into public transport, the same. When you wait in line at the bank, anywhere masons are working at a construction site, and even at the hospital, the nurses of certain age put it on. It's always the same, if you visit someone past some age, you just can't stop hearing those songs. I mean, they aren't bad or anything, but it just gets a bit repetitive after a while. There's one about some kid that leaves his town with his worn-out shoes... and it goes like that, "worn-out shoes, worn-out shoes, where do you go with that look?". Then there's another about a lady that was called crazy by the kids in the town because she waited for her lost love at the threshold of her house for many years. Ended up in a psych-ward. Also, there's ABBA in Spanish, good stuff. But as I said, it gets kind of repetitive after a while. The worst part is, after you hear it for a while, it gets stucked in your head for the rest of the day.
Earworm
Right now, I'm at the office waiting for a meeting.
And yes, even behind closed doors I can hear the radio the guard is listening to.
It's difficult to make up the meaning, maybe due to how far I am from the guard.
Oh yeah, I just heard the tune, it's an old song.
I always wondered why, but for some reason Argentinian rock is very popular among older adults in my country, and apparently the guard is also a fan of it.
There's a radio signal that plays oldies almost every day, each time you go into any public-service office, they're's always the same songs.
When you get into public transport, the same.
If you're shortening the sentence from "it's the same", you don't need to keep "the"
When you wait in line at the bank, anywhere masons are working at a construction site, and even at the hospital, the nurses of certain age put it on.
The sentence structure is difficult, you might need to make this long sentence into a few short ones because it read that at all those places there are older nurses who put the song on.
It's always the same, if you visit someone past someof a certain age, you just can't stop hearing those songs.
Both are ok, but the corrected version is mostly used.
I mean, they aren't bad or anything, but it just gets a bit repetitive after a while.
There's one about some kid that leaves his town with his worn-out shoes... and it goes like that, "worn-out shoes, worn-out shoes, where do you go with that look?".
Then there's another about a lady that was called crazy by the kids in the town because she waited for her lost love at the threshold of her house for many years.
Ended up in a psych-ward.
Also, there's ABBA in Spanish, good stuff.
But as I said, it gets kind of repetitive after a while.
The worst part is, after you hear it for a while, it gets stucked in your head for the rest of the day.
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June 23, 2021
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Right now I'm at the office waiting for a meeting. Right now, I'm at the office waiting for a meeting. |
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And yes, even behind closed doors I can hear the radio the guard is listening to. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's difficult to make up the meaning, maybe due to how far I am from the guard. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Oh yeah, I just heard the tune, it's an old song. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I always wondered why, but for some reason Argentinian rock is very popular among older adults in my country, and apparently the guard is also a fan of it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There's a radio signal that plays oldies almost every day, each time you go into any public-service office, there's always the same songs. There's a radio signal that plays oldies almost every day, each time you go into any public-service office, they're |
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When you get into public transport, the same. When you get into public transport, If you're shortening the sentence from "it's the same", you don't need to keep "the" |
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When you wait in line at the bank, anywhere masons are working at a construction site, and even at the hospital, the nurses of certain age put it on. When you wait in line at the bank, anywhere masons are working at a construction site, and even at the hospital, the nurses of certain age put it on. The sentence structure is difficult, you might need to make this long sentence into a few short ones because it read that at all those places there are older nurses who put the song on. |
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It's always the same, if you visit someone past some age, you just can't stop hearing those songs. It's always the same, if you visit someone Both are ok, but the corrected version is mostly used. |
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I mean, they aren't bad or anything, but it just gets a bit repetitive after a while. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There's one about some kid that leaves his town with his worn-out shoes... and it goes like that, "worn-out shoes, worn-out shoes, where do you go with that look?". This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Then there's another about a lady that was called crazy by the kids in the town because she waited for her lost love at the threshold of her house for many years. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Ended up in a psych-ward. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Also, there's ABBA in Spanish, good stuff. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But as I said, it gets kind of repetitive after a while. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The worst part is, after you hear it for a while, it gets stucked in your head for the rest of the day. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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