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Jefliwn

Sept. 21, 2025

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I like drawing since... I don't know, I can't remember. When I realized I was living, I already like making lines with colors. I remember when I making cartoons characters on my textbook, haha, brings back memories.

Sometimes I made my friends mad at me because of the jealousy. I don't even understand why, why they put so much attention to this 'talent' of mine. Like, I can't even make my life with this talent. It can't give you lots of money. Well, it does, sometimes I got asked from my friend on Facebook to make drawing for them, and they'll pay for it. And I like sharing my arts to my social media, like those days. My arts been everywhere because of the funny things I put on it. Suddenly I got lots of followers. They came to my account to see my arts and memes (I do draw and memes, they like funny things, and I like drawing, so why don't we just do both?).

I got famous like... Instantly.
“not bad!” I said.
But I guess dude named Mark Zuckerberg didn't like it. About 1 month ago, my account got disabled for (S word) reason. All my arts, memes, progress, FRIENDS all GONE!!!

Now, I barely open drawing software on my phone. I can't find the right time, simply because I got to work. And thanks Mark, you make the situation even worse.

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I’ve like drawing since...

Since you’re talking about how long you’ve liked drawing for, you should say “I have”

When I realized I was livinggained consciousness, I already like making lines with colors.

I’m pretty sure you’re referring to when as a child you just randomly gain the realization that you’re a human being or something like that, and I’ve heard that be referred to as “gaining consciousness”. This is mainly slang, but I don’t know any better way to phrase it

I remember when I making cartoons characters on my textbook, haha, brings back memories.

These words are not needed, since you’re specifically talking about the character you would make

Sometimes I made my friends mad at me becajealouse of the jealousyme.

This sounds more natural

I don't even understand why, why they putaid so much attention to this 'talent' of mine.

This is a better way to phrase this

Like, I can't even make mya lifeving with this talent.

It can't givet you lots of money.

Well, it does, sometimes. I got asked fromby my friend on Facebook to make drawing for them, and they'll pay me for it.

I think this part would flow better if you split the sentence into two parts. There’s also a few minor grammar errors here

And I like sharing my arts to my social media, like those days.

The word “art” does not need to be plural

My arts been everywhere because of the funny things I put on it.

They came to my account to see my arts and memes (I do draw and memes, they like funny things, and I like drawing, so why don't weI just do both?).

I got famous like... Iinstantly.

No capitalization is needed here

But I guess a dude named Mark Zuckerberg didn't like it.

All my arts, memes, progress, FRIENDS all GONE!!!

I can't find the right time, simply because I got to work.

“I got to work” technically works, but it is very casual and informal, and I think it’s some kind of minor dialect of English. Some other ways you can say this are “I have to work”, “I need to work”, etc.

And thanks Mark, you makde the situation even worse.

I think you should use the past tense here

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This is very good! Just some very minor grammar errors and unnatural sounding language

I’m sorry to hear that happened, that sucks. I also love to draw, I don’t have much of a following, but I can imagine that’s horrible.

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I like drawing since...

I don't know, I can't remember.

When I realized I was living, I alreadyI knew from the day that I was born that I liked making lines with colors.

I am not quite sure what you are trying to say here. So I rewrote it as how I would say it. I think you are saying that you liked making lines with color from the day you were born.

I remember when I making cartoons characters oin my textbook, haha, brings back memories.

Sometimes I made my friends mad at me because of the jealousyas they were jealous of my talent.

I think here you are saying that your friends were jealous because of you drawing talent.

I doidn't even understand why, why. Why would they putay so much attention to this 'talent' of mine.

Since you were talking in the past before I am assuming you meant to say I didn't and not I don't, but you could be in the present tense now and that would be okay.

Like, I can't even make mya lifeving with this talent.

a living is a way of saying "a career"

ItYou can't give youmake a lots of money.

Well, it does, sometimes I got asked fromby my friends on Facebook to makedo a drawing for them, and they'll would pay for it.

And I liked sharing my arts to on my social media, likeback in those days.

"back in those days" is a way of saying in the past time period that I was specifically talking about

My art has been everywhere because of the funny things I would put on it.

art is singular and plural I believe.

Suddenly I got lots of followers.

They came to my account to see my arts and memes (I do draw and memes, theyake/post memes, my followers like funny things, and I like drawing, so why don't we just do bothnot combine the two?).

I dont know what you meant at the end. Unless you meant They like funny things and you like to draw, so you will include memes and drawing. Though the way you phrased it, it seems like to me you are combining the two.

I got famous like... Instantly.

“not bad!” I said.

But I guess a dude named Mark Zuckerberg didn't like it.

About 1 month ago, my account got disabled for (S word) reason.

All my arts, memes, progress, and FRIENDS are all GONE!!!

Now, I barely open any drawing software on my phone.

I can't find the right time, simply because I gothave to work.

"got to work" works here. Have is another way of saying a similar thing.

And thanks Mark, you makde the situation even worse.

made since it is in the past when he did it.

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Great job! Little fixes here and there, but seems like you are doing a great job! Keep up the hard work.

I have liked drawing since...

I don't know, I can't remember.

When I realized I was living, I alreadyFrom as far back as I can remember, I liked making lines with colors.

"When I realized I was living" doesn't work exactly in English.

I remember when I makdrawing cartoons characters oin my textbook, haha,. It brings back memories haha.

Sometimes Iit made my friends mad at me because of ththey were jealousy.

I don't even understand why, - why they putaid so much attention to this 'talent' of mine.

Normally in English we use the phrase "pay attention" not "put attention"

Like, I can't even make mya lifeving with this talent.

One says, "I do X to make a living", not "I do X to make my life".

It can't give you lots of money.

Well, it does, sometimes I got asked fromAlthough, my friend on Facebook has asked me to make drawing for them, and he/she said they'lld pay for it.

And I like sharing my arts to on my social media, like those days.

We share ON social media not TO

My art has been everywhere (on social media) because of the funny things I put on itdraw.

SAt one point I realized, suddenly, I gothad lots of followers.

Added "at one point I realized" to make it flow better and to give you a point of reference.

They cahad come to my account to see my arts and memes (I do draw and memes, theypost (?) memes - my followers like funny things, and I like drawing, so why don't wenot just do both?).

Not 100% what you're trying to say here

nNot bad!” I said.

But I guess a dude named Mark Zuckerberg didn't like it.

About 1 month ago, my account got disabled for (Sno (F word) reason.

Lol

All my arts, memes, progress, FRIENDS allwere GONE!!!

Now, I barely open the drawing software on my phone.

I can't never find the right time, simply because I got toof my work.

And thanks Mark, you make the for making my situation even worse.

Feedback

Good effort writing so much in English. Maybe work on your past/conditional tenses a bit.

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I like drawing since...


I have liked drawing since...

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I’ve like drawing since...

Since you’re talking about how long you’ve liked drawing for, you should say “I have”

I don't know, I can't remember.


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When I realized I was living, I already like making lines with colors.


When I realized I was living, I alreadyFrom as far back as I can remember, I liked making lines with colors.

"When I realized I was living" doesn't work exactly in English.

When I realized I was living, I alreadyI knew from the day that I was born that I liked making lines with colors.

I am not quite sure what you are trying to say here. So I rewrote it as how I would say it. I think you are saying that you liked making lines with color from the day you were born.

When I realized I was livinggained consciousness, I already like making lines with colors.

I’m pretty sure you’re referring to when as a child you just randomly gain the realization that you’re a human being or something like that, and I’ve heard that be referred to as “gaining consciousness”. This is mainly slang, but I don’t know any better way to phrase it

Sometimes I made my friends mad at me because of the jealousy.


Sometimes Iit made my friends mad at me because of ththey were jealousy.

Sometimes I made my friends mad at me because of the jealousyas they were jealous of my talent.

I think here you are saying that your friends were jealous because of you drawing talent.

Sometimes I made my friends mad at me becajealouse of the jealousyme.

This sounds more natural

My arts been everywhere because of the funny things I put on it.


My art has been everywhere (on social media) because of the funny things I put on itdraw.

My art has been everywhere because of the funny things I would put on it.

art is singular and plural I believe.

My arts been everywhere because of the funny things I put on it.

Suddenly I got lots of followers.


SAt one point I realized, suddenly, I gothad lots of followers.

Added "at one point I realized" to make it flow better and to give you a point of reference.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

They came to my account to see my arts and memes (I do draw and memes, they like funny things, and I like drawing, so why don't we just do both?).


They cahad come to my account to see my arts and memes (I do draw and memes, theypost (?) memes - my followers like funny things, and I like drawing, so why don't wenot just do both?).

Not 100% what you're trying to say here

They came to my account to see my arts and memes (I do draw and memes, theyake/post memes, my followers like funny things, and I like drawing, so why don't we just do bothnot combine the two?).

I dont know what you meant at the end. Unless you meant They like funny things and you like to draw, so you will include memes and drawing. Though the way you phrased it, it seems like to me you are combining the two.

They came to my account to see my arts and memes (I do draw and memes, they like funny things, and I like drawing, so why don't weI just do both?).

I got famous like... Instantly.


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I got famous like... Iinstantly.

No capitalization is needed here

“not bad!” I said.


nNot bad!” I said.

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And thanks Mark, you make the situation even worse.


And thanks Mark, you make the for making my situation even worse.

And thanks Mark, you makde the situation even worse.

made since it is in the past when he did it.

And thanks Mark, you makde the situation even worse.

I think you should use the past tense here

I remember when I making cartoons characters on my textbook, haha, brings back memories.


I remember when I makdrawing cartoons characters oin my textbook, haha,. It brings back memories haha.

I remember when I making cartoons characters oin my textbook, haha, brings back memories.

I remember when I making cartoons characters on my textbook, haha, brings back memories.

These words are not needed, since you’re specifically talking about the character you would make

I don't even understand why, why they put so much attention to this 'talent' of mine.


I don't even understand why, - why they putaid so much attention to this 'talent' of mine.

Normally in English we use the phrase "pay attention" not "put attention"

I doidn't even understand why, why. Why would they putay so much attention to this 'talent' of mine.

Since you were talking in the past before I am assuming you meant to say I didn't and not I don't, but you could be in the present tense now and that would be okay.

I don't even understand why, why they putaid so much attention to this 'talent' of mine.

This is a better way to phrase this

Like, I can't even make my life with this talent.


Like, I can't even make mya lifeving with this talent.

One says, "I do X to make a living", not "I do X to make my life".

Like, I can't even make mya lifeving with this talent.

a living is a way of saying "a career"

Like, I can't even make mya lifeving with this talent.

It can't give you lots of money.


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ItYou can't give youmake a lots of money.

It can't givet you lots of money.

Well, it does, sometimes I got asked from my friend on Facebook to make drawing for them, and they'll pay for it.


Well, it does, sometimes I got asked fromAlthough, my friend on Facebook has asked me to make drawing for them, and he/she said they'lld pay for it.

Well, it does, sometimes I got asked fromby my friends on Facebook to makedo a drawing for them, and they'll would pay for it.

Well, it does, sometimes. I got asked fromby my friend on Facebook to make drawing for them, and they'll pay me for it.

I think this part would flow better if you split the sentence into two parts. There’s also a few minor grammar errors here

And I like sharing my arts to my social media, like those days.


And I like sharing my arts to on my social media, like those days.

We share ON social media not TO

And I liked sharing my arts to on my social media, likeback in those days.

"back in those days" is a way of saying in the past time period that I was specifically talking about

And I like sharing my arts to my social media, like those days.

The word “art” does not need to be plural

But I guess dude named Mark Zuckerberg didn't like it.


But I guess a dude named Mark Zuckerberg didn't like it.

But I guess a dude named Mark Zuckerberg didn't like it.

But I guess a dude named Mark Zuckerberg didn't like it.

About 1 month ago, my account got disabled for (S word) reason.


About 1 month ago, my account got disabled for (Sno (F word) reason.

Lol

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All my arts, memes, progress, FRIENDS all GONE!!!


All my arts, memes, progress, FRIENDS allwere GONE!!!

All my arts, memes, progress, and FRIENDS are all GONE!!!

All my arts, memes, progress, FRIENDS all GONE!!!

Now, I barely open drawing software on my phone.


Now, I barely open the drawing software on my phone.

Now, I barely open any drawing software on my phone.

I can't find the right time, simply because I got to work.


I can't never find the right time, simply because I got toof my work.

I can't find the right time, simply because I gothave to work.

"got to work" works here. Have is another way of saying a similar thing.

I can't find the right time, simply because I got to work.

“I got to work” technically works, but it is very casual and informal, and I think it’s some kind of minor dialect of English. Some other ways you can say this are “I have to work”, “I need to work”, etc.

And I like sharing my art to my social media, like those days.


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