yesterday
Do you play videl games?
I love playing video games, especially prefer single role-playing games like Final Fantasy or Dragon Quest. I've played Clair Obscur and Lies of P. Their music and scene are amazing, so I want you to play these games. Just watching on YouTube is fine.
I love playing video games, especially prefer single role-playing games like Final Fantasy or Dragon Quest.
Some redundance.
Their music and scenes are amazing, so I want you to play these games.
today
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I intended to write simple sentences this time, but the nuance was off.
From the reader's perspective, which is more enjoyable: simple sentences or difficult-sounding sentences?
Do you play videl games?
Do you play video games?
I love playing video games, especially prefer single role-playing games like Final Fantasy or Dragon Quest.
I love playing video games. I especially prefer single player role-playing games like Final Fantasy or Dragon Quest.
I've played Clair Obscur and Lies of P.
I've previously played Clair Obscur and Lies of P.
Their music and scene are amazing, so I want you to play these games.
Their music and scene are amazing, so I really recommend you to play these games.
Just watching on YouTube is fine.
Just watching on YouTube is also fine.
yesterday
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I intended to write simple sentences this time, but the nuance was off.
From the reader's perspective, which is more enjoyable: simple sentences or difficult-sounding sentences?
Do you play videl games?
OPTION A: I love playing video games, especially single role-playing games like Final Fantasy or Dragon Quest.¶
OPTION B: I love playing video games, especially I prefer single role-playing games like Final Fantasy or Dragon Quest.
OPTION A is better: it is succinct.
I've played Clair Obscur and Lies of P.
Their music and scenevisual effects are amazing, so I want you to playrecommend these games.
Just watching them on YouTube is fine.
yesterday
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I intended to write simple sentences this time, but the nuance was off.
From the reader's perspective, which is more enjoyable: simple sentences or difficult-sounding sentences?
Do you play videlo games?
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I love playing video games, especially prefer single role-playing games like Final Fantasy or Dragon Quest.
"prefer" should not be placed here.
Recently, I've played Clair Obscur and Lies of P.
I'm guessing these are games you've played recently, since they're both relatively new.
Their music and sceneettings are amazing, so I want you to play these gamesm.
"I want you to" sounds like you're directly asking someone to go and do it. It might come off as a little pushy. For a softer way of expressing this you could say "I highly recommend you play them".
"scene" doesn't make much sense in this sentence, but I'm guessing you meant "setting" (設定)
JEven just watching playthroughs of them on YouTube is fine.
This sentence sounded a little incomplete without specifying what the person should watch.
Feedback
I love RPGs too! Recently I've been playing Final Fantasy 1 and it has been very fun. I also want to play Clair Obscur soon.
yesterday
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I intended to write simple sentences this time, but the nuance was off.
From the reader's perspective, which is more enjoyable: simple sentences or difficult-sounding sentences?
today
Since no one has answered your question, I will try to. Simple sentences are good for the reader because they are easier to read and understand. We can read them faster. Complex sentences, when they are well written, are good because they give us a more complete image or experience. I think most readers can enjoy both kinds of sentences, as long as the writing is good.
I love playing video games,; I especially prefer single role-playing games like Final Fantasy or Dragon Quest.
Or, "I love playing video games, especially single role-playing games like Final Fantasy or Dragon Quest."
I've played Clair Obscur and Lies of P.
Their music and (graphics / visuals / cutscenes) are amazing, so I want you to play these games.
We wouldn't say "scenes" for video games, but I gave some alternatives depending on what you meant.
Graphics = the technical quality/level about how the game looks
Visuals = a more general term about how the game looks overall (can account for artistic style as well as graphics)
Cutscene = the part of a video game where the player is only watching, with no interaction, as a scene plays out before you as it would in a movie
Just watching on YouTube is fine.
Feedback
Great job.
I'd like to play Clair Obscur one day, because everyone speaks so highly of it. Final Fantasy is legendary, especially for its music. I remember being so impressed that they made such captivating music using only MIDI when I would play on the SNES.
yesterday
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I intended to write simple sentences this time, but the nuance was off.
From the reader's perspective, which is more enjoyable: simple sentences or difficult-sounding sentences?
today
I would say this is for you to choose, since you are here to strengthen your English, not to entertain us. I think you succeeded to write in a simple / casual fashion, which is a pretty normal goal to have.
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Their music and scene are amazing, so I want you to play these games. The We wouldn't say "scenes" for video games, but I gave some alternatives depending on what you meant. Graphics = the technical quality/level about how the game looks Visuals = a more general term about how the game looks overall (can account for artistic style as well as graphics) Cutscene = the part of a video game where the player is only watching, with no interaction, as a scene plays out before you as it would in a movie Their music and s "I want you to" sounds like you're directly asking someone to go and do it. It might come off as a little pushy. For a softer way of expressing this you could say "I highly recommend you play them". "scene" doesn't make much sense in this sentence, but I'm guessing you meant "setting" (設定) Their music and Their music and scene are amazing, so I want you to play these games. Their music and scene are amazing, so I really recommend you to play these games. Their music and scenes are amazing, so I want you to play these games. |
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Just watching on YouTube is fine. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
This sentence sounded a little incomplete without specifying what the person should watch. Just watching them on YouTube is fine. Just watching on YouTube is fine. Just watching on YouTube is also fine. |
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