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TOMO_o

Sept. 5, 2025

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Do you like rain?

It depends on the situation. When temperature is extreme heat and I need to go outside, I love rain. However, I don't like humidity because it makes mold grown. The situation that with old-fashioned umbrella in moderate rain is called "furyu" in Japanese.

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Do you like rain?

It depends on the situation.

When the temperature is extreme heatly hot, and I need to go outside, I love (the) rain.

However, I don't like humidity because it makes mold grown (a lot more/faster).

The situation that with an old-fashioned umbrella in moderate rain is called "furyu" in Japanese.

This is interesting.

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TOMO_o

Sept. 6, 2025

28

Thank you very much for your careful correction.
The difference between adjectives and nouns and how to use them is difficult.
I will study hard.

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marblemenow

Sept. 6, 2025

12

You're welcome. Continue practicing writing in English.

Do you like rain?

It depends on the situation.

When temperature is extreme healy hot and I need to go outside, I love rain.

However, I don't like humidity because it makes mold grown.

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TOMO_o

Sept. 6, 2025

28

Thank you very much for your careful correction.
The difference between adjectives and nouns and how to use them is difficult.
I will study hard.

Do you like rain?

It depends on the situation.

When temperature is extreme healy hot and I need to go outside, I love rain.

However, I don't like humidity because it makcauses mold to grown.

The situation that with old-fashioned umbrella that can be used in moderate rain is called "furyu" in Japanese.

I am not sure what exactly you want to say here. Pardon my correction if I got it wrong

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TOMO_o

Sept. 6, 2025

28

Thank you very much for your careful correction.
The difference between adjectives and nouns and how to use them is difficult.
I will study hard.

It depends on the situation.

When the temperature is extreme healy hot and I need to go outside, I love (the) rain.

We're describing the temperature, so better to use the adjective (hot) rather than heat (a noun).
Speaking about rain as a concept could also naturally be referred to as "the" rain

However, I don't like humidity because it makes mold grown.

Grown = past tense of grow. We're again speaking about generalities, so present tense is appropriate (grow)

The situation that withof using an old-fashioned umbrella in moderate rain is called "furyu" in Japanese.

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Great job. I adore rain, but I also don't want to live in darkness all the time.

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TOMO_o

Sept. 6, 2025

28

Thank you very much for your careful correction.
The difference between adjectives and nouns and how to use them is difficult.
I will study hard.

Do you like rain?


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When temperature is extreme heat and I need to go outside, I love rain.


When the temperature is extreme healy hot and I need to go outside, I love (the) rain.

We're describing the temperature, so better to use the adjective (hot) rather than heat (a noun). Speaking about rain as a concept could also naturally be referred to as "the" rain

When temperature is extreme healy hot and I need to go outside, I love rain.

When temperature is extreme healy hot and I need to go outside, I love rain.

When the temperature is extreme heatly hot, and I need to go outside, I love (the) rain.

However, I don't like humidity because it makes mold grown.


However, I don't like humidity because it makes mold grown.

Grown = past tense of grow. We're again speaking about generalities, so present tense is appropriate (grow)

However, I don't like humidity because it makcauses mold to grown.

However, I don't like humidity because it makes mold grown.

However, I don't like humidity because it makes mold grown (a lot more/faster).

The situation that with old-fashioned umbrella in moderate rain is called "furyu" in Japanese.


The situation that withof using an old-fashioned umbrella in moderate rain is called "furyu" in Japanese.

The situation that with old-fashioned umbrella that can be used in moderate rain is called "furyu" in Japanese.

I am not sure what exactly you want to say here. Pardon my correction if I got it wrong

The situation that with an old-fashioned umbrella in moderate rain is called "furyu" in Japanese.

This is interesting.

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