March 23, 2021
do you know shunmyo masuno?
Just watched a YouTube video introduce one of his books.
The title is not important.
Because is top selling in Amazon book ranking.
So, if you don’t know you should start reading his books now.
This morning I go my local library and try to his books.
Sure, I can’t find that top selling book in library.
But I did manage to find some of his previous books.
If I like it, I may consider to his top selling book.
The books I can in the local library was Chinese version.
Someday when my Japanese is good enough I will read the Japan version.
do you know shunmyo masuno?
JI just watched a YouTube video introduceing one of his books.
The title is not important.
Because ishe is a top sellinger in Amazon book rankings.
So, if you don’t know him you should start reading his books now.
The direct object "him" is necessary here because the preceding phrase is ambiguous without it.
This morning I gwill go to my local library and try to find his books.
Sure, I can’t find thathis top selling book in the library.
But I did manage to find some of his previous books.
The events in this sentence must occur after the future events in the sentence "This morning I will go to my local library..." This group of sentences, taken together, does not make sense. It would be better to set this sentence in the future to keep the story consistent. "But I hope I will find some of his previous books".
If I like ithem, I may consider to his top selling book.
The books I can find in the local library wasare the Chinese versions.
Again, this sentence is out-of-order timewise with regards to the other sentences.
Someday when my Japanese is good enough I will read the Japanese version.
Feedback
I advise you to work on improving the order of events in your writing. The sentences in your paragraph should place events in proper sequence and the verb tenses should be consistent throughout.
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do you know shunmyo masuno? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Just watched a YouTube video introduce one of his books.
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The title is not important. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Because is top selling in Amazon book ranking. Because |
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So, if you don’t know you should start reading his books now. So The direct object "him" is necessary here because the preceding phrase is ambiguous without it. |
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This morning I go my local library and try to his books. This morning I |
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Sure, I can’t find that top selling book in library. Sure, I can’t find |
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But I did manage to find some of his previous books. But I did manage to find some of his previous books. The events in this sentence must occur after the future events in the sentence "This morning I will go to my local library..." This group of sentences, taken together, does not make sense. It would be better to set this sentence in the future to keep the story consistent. "But I hope I will find some of his previous books". |
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If I like it, I may consider to his top selling book. If I like |
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The books I can in the local library was Chinese version. The books I can find in the local library Again, this sentence is out-of-order timewise with regards to the other sentences. |
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Someday when my Japanese is good enough I will read the Japan version. Someday when my Japanese is good enough I will read the Japanese version. |
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