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TOMO_o

Sept. 29, 2025

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Do you have something that you don't want to throw away?

I perfectly cleaned up my room about two years ago, so there are not anything that I just don't have the heart to throw away. On the other hand, I have the keepsake I definitely don't want to throw away. Leather groves. That's grandfather's memento and it's very cool.

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I perfectly cleaned up my room about two years ago, so there are not anyis nothing that I just don't have the heart to throw away.

"not anything" can be simplified to "is nothing". and "are' doesnt come before "anything", "is" does.

On the other hand, I have the keepsake I definitely don't want to throw away.

Leather groves.

That's grandfather's memento, and it's very cool.

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TOMO_o

Sept. 30, 2025

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Thank you so much for your careful corrections.
I still forget to use "they" or "are" even though it's plural.
Also, I'm still having trouble figuring out which adverbs go well with which verbs.
I guess the only way to improve is to keep studying.

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doechiisclass

Sept. 30, 2025

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I wish you the best on your journey. I'm learning Arabic so wish me luck

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doechiisclass

Sept. 30, 2025

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And wait, you have another mistake. "Is nothing" and "I just don't" are two negatives in one sentence and both cancel each other out and the translation becomes "There is everything I have the heart to throw away". The correct version is "There is nothing that I have the heart to throw away"

I perfectly cleantidied up my room about two years ago, so there are not anything that I just don't have the heart to throw away.

We would say "perfectly tided" or "completely cleaned". But we don't say "perfectly cleaned. This is because "tidying" refers specifically to placing things in their correct place and cleaning is something that includes removing germs/dust/particles.

On the other hand, I have thHowever, I keep one keepsake I definitely don't want to throw away.

That's memento from my grandfather's memento and it's very cool.

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TOMO_o

Sept. 30, 2025

27

Thank you so much for your careful corrections.
I still forget to use "they" or "are" even though it's plural.
Also, I'm still having trouble figuring out which adverbs go well with which verbs.
I guess the only way to improve is to keep studying.

Do you have something that you don't want to throw away?

I perfectly cleaned up my room about two years ago, so there are not anything that I just don't have the heart to throw anything away.

Lots of ways to phrase this. Just be careful of double negatives and use contractions.

On the other hand, I have theis keepsake I definitely don't want to throw away.

Leather grloves. (?)

That'sey are my grandfather's memento and it's very cool.

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Good job!

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TOMO_o

Sept. 30, 2025

27

Thank you so much for your careful corrections.
I still forget to use "they" or "are" even though it's plural.
Also, I'm still having trouble figuring out which adverbs go well with which verbs.
I guess the only way to improve is to keep studying.

I perfectly cleaned up my room thoroughly about two years ago, so there are noisn't anything here that I just don't have the heart to throw away.

I didn't correct it, but "I just don't have the heart to throw away" sounds a bit strange here. Maybe "Iyou don't want to throw away" is better.
Also, "perfectly" (I guess you mean 完璧に or 完全に) is not quite right here. Thoroughly 徹底的にmay fit better.

On the other handHowever, I have thea keepsake I definitely don't want to throw away.

"On the other hand" is better used for total opposite things/situations. However is ’しかし or だが and flows better.

Leather grloves.

Better would be "a pair of leather gloves".

That'sey are a memento from my grandfather's memento and it'sare very cool.

Gloves is plural.

Feedback

Great job! Plural and singular are so hard to get right in English.

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TOMO_o

Sept. 30, 2025

27

Thank you so much for your careful corrections.
I still forget to use "they" or "are" even though it's plural.
Also, I'm still having trouble figuring out which adverbs go well with which verbs.
I guess the only way to improve is to keep studying.

I perfectly cleaned up my room about two years ago, perfectly....¶
so there areis not anything that I just don't(want / have the heart) to throw away.

adverb after the subject is more natural here.
are is used for pronouns like you, we and they.
The double negatives at the end make it a bit confusing, keep it simple.

On the other hand, I do have thea keepsake I definitely don't want to throw away.

"a" should be used here since you didn't specify a specific keepsake yet.

Leather grloves.

That's my grandfather's memento and it's very cool.

adding "my" here makes the sentence more complete and sound more mature. If you're writing in the perspective of a child /teen it could work.

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TOMO_o

Sept. 30, 2025

27

Thank you so much for your careful corrections.
I still forget to use "they" or "are" even though it's plural.
Also, I'm still having trouble figuring out which adverbs go well with which verbs.
I guess the only way to improve is to keep studying.

Leather groves.


Leather grloves.

Leather grloves.

Better would be "a pair of leather gloves".

Leather grloves. (?)

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Do you have something that you don't want to throw away?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I perfectly cleaned up my room about two years ago, so there are not anything that I just don't have the heart to throw away.


I perfectly cleaned up my room about two years ago, perfectly....¶
so there areis not anything that I just don't(want / have the heart) to throw away.

adverb after the subject is more natural here. are is used for pronouns like you, we and they. The double negatives at the end make it a bit confusing, keep it simple.

I perfectly cleaned up my room thoroughly about two years ago, so there are noisn't anything here that I just don't have the heart to throw away.

I didn't correct it, but "I just don't have the heart to throw away" sounds a bit strange here. Maybe "Iyou don't want to throw away" is better. Also, "perfectly" (I guess you mean 完璧に or 完全に) is not quite right here. Thoroughly 徹底的にmay fit better.

I perfectly cleaned up my room about two years ago, so there are not anything that I just don't have the heart to throw anything away.

Lots of ways to phrase this. Just be careful of double negatives and use contractions.

I perfectly cleantidied up my room about two years ago, so there are not anything that I just don't have the heart to throw away.

We would say "perfectly tided" or "completely cleaned". But we don't say "perfectly cleaned. This is because "tidying" refers specifically to placing things in their correct place and cleaning is something that includes removing germs/dust/particles.

I perfectly cleaned up my room about two years ago, so there are not anyis nothing that I just don't have the heart to throw away.

"not anything" can be simplified to "is nothing". and "are' doesnt come before "anything", "is" does.

On the other hand, I have the keepsake I definitely don't want to throw away.


On the other hand, I do have thea keepsake I definitely don't want to throw away.

"a" should be used here since you didn't specify a specific keepsake yet.

On the other handHowever, I have thea keepsake I definitely don't want to throw away.

"On the other hand" is better used for total opposite things/situations. However is ’しかし or だが and flows better.

On the other hand, I have theis keepsake I definitely don't want to throw away.

On the other hand, I have thHowever, I keep one keepsake I definitely don't want to throw away.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

That's grandfather's memento and it's very cool.


That's my grandfather's memento and it's very cool.

adding "my" here makes the sentence more complete and sound more mature. If you're writing in the perspective of a child /teen it could work.

That'sey are a memento from my grandfather's memento and it'sare very cool.

Gloves is plural.

That'sey are my grandfather's memento and it's very cool.

That's memento from my grandfather's memento and it's very cool.

That's grandfather's memento, and it's very cool.

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