May 31, 2025
Do you have any memories that make you blush?
Of course I do. When I was junior high school student, I presented a gift to my girlfriend. I thought it was good ornaments for room at that time, but I look back now, it was quite weird. I might have bad senses of gift presenting.
Do you have any memories that make you blush?
Of course I do.
When I was a junior high school student, I presentedgave a gift to my girlfriend.
Or "when I was in junior high"
I thought it was a good ornaments for roomroom decoration at thate time, but I looking back now, it was quite weird.
I might have a bad senses of for gift presentgiving.
June 1, 2025
Thank you very much for the careful correction.
Of course I do.
When I was a junior high school student, I presentedgave a gift to my girlfriend.
I thought it was good ornaments for roommade a good room decoration at that time, but I looking back at it now, it was actually quite weird.
I might have a bad senses of gift presenting for choosing gifts.
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Hope it was overall a nice memory for you! :)
June 1, 2025
Thank you very much for the careful correction.
Do you have any memories that make you blush?
Of course I do.
When I wasMORE SUCCINCTLY: In junior high school student, I presented a gift to my girlfriend.
NOTE: The original is possible, but the revision above is more succinct.
I thought it would be as good room ornaments for room at that time, but I look back, but on hindsight I realize now, it was quite weird.
I might have bad senses of gifPerhaps I was awkward at presenting gifts.
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Indeed. Opinions about beauty often differ between men and women.
June 1, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful correction.
Do you have any memories that make you blush?
Of course I do.
When I was a junior high school student, I presented a gift to my girlfriend.
The article/determiner "a" is expected.
I thought it wasthe ornaments I gave were good fornaments for (decorating) a room at that time, but I looking back (at it) now, it was quite weird.
(1) While "I thought it was good ornaments" is grammatically correct (I think), it's very jarring, due to the plural noun "ornaments" immediately following the singular verb "is". I have rephrased your sentence to make it sound more natural.
(2) An article like "a" or "her" is expected before "room".
(3) When "looking back now" is used this way, you need not attach "I" to it.
I might have a bad senses of gift present-giving.
(1) You're only referring to one sense (the sense of gift-giving), so "senses" should be singular ("sense"). The plural form may be used in a sentence like "I have bad senses when it comes to gift-giving", where "senses" can refer to a number of senses which are all involved in gift-giving.
(2) The typical phrase would be "gift-giving", rather than "gift presenting".
June 1, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful correction. Your careful and easy-to-understand explanation is very helpful.
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When I was junior high school student, I presented a gift to my girlfriend. When I was a junior high school student, I presented a gift to my girlfriend. The article/determiner "a" is expected.
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I thought it was good ornaments for room at that time, but I look back now, it was quite weird. I thought it would be a I thought (1) While "I thought it was good ornaments" is grammatically correct (I think), it's very jarring, due to the plural noun "ornaments" immediately following the singular verb "is". I have rephrased your sentence to make it sound more natural. (2) An article like "a" or "her" is expected before "room". (3) When "looking back now" is used this way, you need not attach "I" to it. I thought it I thought it was a good |
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I might have bad senses of gift presenting. I might have a bad sense (1) You're only referring to one sense (the sense of gift-giving), so "senses" should be singular ("sense"). The plural form may be used in a sentence like "I have bad senses when it comes to gift-giving", where "senses" can refer to a number of senses which are all involved in gift-giving. (2) The typical phrase would be "gift-giving", rather than "gift presenting".
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