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April 7, 2025

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Do You Have a Place Where You Can Feel Calm?

My bedroom. It's full of stuff what I like and I can be alone. Even I've exhausted from work, once I arrive at home, my mind is healed. Here is my sanctuary.

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Do You Have a Place Where You Can Feel Calm?

My bedroom.

It's full of stuff what I like and it's a place where I can be alone.

Even I'veif I'm exhausted from work, once I arrive at home, my mind is healed.

Here is my sanctuary.

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TOMO_o

April 8, 2025

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Thank you very much for the careful correction.

It's full ofwith stuff wthat I like and I can be alone.

Even I'vewhen I'm exhausted from work, once I arrive at home, my mind is healed.

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Great work!

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TOMO_o

April 8, 2025

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Thank you very much for the careful correction.

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Do You Have a Place Where You Can Feel Calm?

My bedroom.

It's full of stuff wthat I like and I can be alone.

Even I'vewhen I'm exhausted from work, once I arrive at home, my mind is healed.

Here is my sanctuary.

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Good writing !

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TOMO_o

April 8, 2025

26

Thank you very much for the careful correction.

Do You Have a Place Where You Can Feel Calm?


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My bedroom.


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It's full of stuff what I like and I can be alone.


It's full of stuff wthat I like and I can be alone.

It's full ofwith stuff wthat I like and I can be alone.

It's full of stuff what I like and it's a place where I can be alone.

Even I've exhausted from work, once I arrive at home, my mind is healed.


Even I'vewhen I'm exhausted from work, once I arrive at home, my mind is healed.

Even I'vewhen I'm exhausted from work, once I arrive at home, my mind is healed.

Even I'veif I'm exhausted from work, once I arrive at home, my mind is healed.

Here is my sanctuary.


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