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TOMO_o

Oct. 4, 2025

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Do you have a favorite convenience store chain?

No, I don't have favorite particular one. I often go into a convenience store, but I don't mind which convenience store chain I go, I just choice the nearest one.By the way, self-checkout system has been distributed lately in Japan. Are there similar system in other countries?

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I often go into ato convenience stores, but I don't mind which convenience store chain I go to, I just choicose the nearest one.
By the way, the self-checkout system has been distributedmore common lately in Japan.

Just saying "chain" helps your sentence sound less repetitive. Dont worry, people will know that you are referring to convenience stores :)

By the way is great! If you want, you could also use "Fun fact, the self-checkout system ..." or "Did you know, that the self-checkout system..."

Are there similar systems in other countries?

Added the -s to systems because countries are plural.

To make it sound more emotional you could add:

I'm curious to know if there are similar systems in other countries. Let me know!

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Overall, your sentences are easy to understand. Keep going! You are doing great 🥰

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antlei

Oct. 4, 2025

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To answer your question about the similar systems:

In Singapore, it is common to see self-checkout systems in supermarkets and at certain convenience store chains. It really helps, especially during peak hours or during the weekends.

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TOMO_o

Oct. 4, 2025

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Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
Maybe my English skills are gradually improving.
Now I'd like to not only focus on writing, but also on training my ears.
If I can't understand what the other person is saying, I can't have a good conversation.

No, I don't have favorite particular one.

I often go into a convenience store, but I don't mind which convenience store chain I go, to; I just choicose the nearest one. By the way, self-checkout system has been distributed lately in Japan.

Add a space after the full stop. "Choice" is not a real verb, choose is. To connect clauses, add a semicolon after go and after go, write "to" then add the semi colon because "chain I go" seems incomplete.

Are there similar system in other countries?

In India, not at all. In some posh areas, there are self-checkout systems, and we do not rely on small convenience stores open 24 hours; we rely on big supermarket chains, which we buy from usually on Sundays because there are 6 work days in India, and we make the groceries work for a week, and go buy again, but some families can go up to weeks or even months.

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You are improving day by day; You have very minor mistakes which do not need a lot of attention, and even with mistakes, native speakers can understand you clearly.

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TOMO_o

Oct. 4, 2025

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Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
Maybe my English skills are gradually improving.
Now I'd like to not only focus on writing, but also on training my ears.
If I can't understand what the other person is saying, I can't have a good conversation.

Do you have a favorite convenience store chain?


No, I don't have favorite particular one.


No, I don't have favorite particular one.

No, I don't have a favorite in particular on
or:¶
No, I don't have a particular favorit
e.

I often go into a convenience store, but I don't mind which convenience store chain I go, I just choice the nearest one.By the way, self-checkout system has been distributed lately in Japan.


I often go into a convenience store, but I don't mind which convenience store chain I go, to; I just choicose the nearest one. By the way, self-checkout system has been distributed lately in Japan.

Add a space after the full stop. "Choice" is not a real verb, choose is. To connect clauses, add a semicolon after go and after go, write "to" then add the semi colon because "chain I go" seems incomplete.

I often go into ato convenience stores, but I don't mind which convenience store chain I go to, I just choicose the nearest one.
By the way, the self-checkout system has been distributedmore common lately in Japan.

Just saying "chain" helps your sentence sound less repetitive. Dont worry, people will know that you are referring to convenience stores :) By the way is great! If you want, you could also use "Fun fact, the self-checkout system ..." or "Did you know, that the self-checkout system..."

Are there similar system in other countries?


Are there similar system in other countries?

In India, not at all. In some posh areas, there are self-checkout systems, and we do not rely on small convenience stores open 24 hours; we rely on big supermarket chains, which we buy from usually on Sundays because there are 6 work days in India, and we make the groceries work for a week, and go buy again, but some families can go up to weeks or even months.

Are there similar systems in other countries?

Added the -s to systems because countries are plural. To make it sound more emotional you could add: I'm curious to know if there are similar systems in other countries. Let me know!

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