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jolishe

April 19, 2021

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Do you find it easy to get to know other people?

I find it rather hard to make new friends, and I believe that’s due to my introverted personality. Often times I feel very daunting around a big group of people. Even when I think back to my teenage years, I remember just having one close friend with who I would share all the details of my life. And when I was in high school you would always find me hanging out with the same group of people. Nowadays, I must say that things haven’t changed much, apparently, it’s getting worse. I have fewer friends than ever but most times that doesn’t bother me. I have been discovering different ways to spend my alone time.

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Do you find it easy to get to know other people?

I find it rather hard to make new friends, and I believe that’s due to my introverted personality.

Often times I feel very dauntinged around a big group of people.

to be daunting is for someone to be intimidating; so the group of people would be daunting. On the other hand, to feel daunted is to be intimidated

Even when I think back to my teenage years, I remember just having just one close friend with whom I would share all the details of my life.

Since the close friend is the object here, it would be 'whom'.

And when I was in high school you would always find me hanging out with the same group of people.

Nowadays, I must say that things haven’t changed much, apparently; in fact, it’s getting worse.

I have fewer friends than everbefore but most times that doesn’t bother me.

I have been discovering different ways to spend my alone time.

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Great paragraph here! The corrections I made are minor, and will only be important if you are writing a paper or an essay. Besides those, your writing is very clear, and has a distinct style to it. You have also made use of several grammar points as well. Good job!

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jolishe

April 20, 2021

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Nowadays, I must say that things haven’t changed much, apparently; in fact, it’s getting worse.

Thanks!

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jolishe

April 20, 2021

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Thank you so much for the feedback and encouragement. It really made my day :)

Do you find it easy to get to know other people?


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I find it rather hard to make new friends, and I believe that’s due to my introverted personality.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Often times I feel very daunting around a big group of people.


Often times I feel very dauntinged around a big group of people.

to be daunting is for someone to be intimidating; so the group of people would be daunting. On the other hand, to feel daunted is to be intimidated

Even when I think back to my teenage years, I remember just having one close friend with who I would share all the details of my life.


Even when I think back to my teenage years, I remember just having just one close friend with whom I would share all the details of my life.

Since the close friend is the object here, it would be 'whom'.

And when I was in high school you would always find me hanging out with the same group of people.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Nowadays, I must say that things haven’t changed much, apparently, it’s getting worse.


Nowadays, I must say that things haven’t changed much, apparently; in fact, it’s getting worse.

I have fewer friends than ever but most times that doesn’t bother me.


I have fewer friends than everbefore but most times that doesn’t bother me.

I have been discovering different ways to spend my alone time.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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