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TOMO_o

Sept. 3, 2025

29
Do you do anything for the emviroment?

I've been trying to use fewer plastic bags these days at convenience store. They used to be free charge in Japan, but they cost 3 to 5 yen now. Other than that, I've been trying to not leave any food uneaten. I'm getting fat lately, though.

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Do you do anything for the emviroment?

I've been trying to use fewer plastic bags these days at the convenience store.

They used to be free charge in Japan, but they cost 3 to 5three to five yen now.

For more formal writing, you write out the numbers between zero to nine.

Other than that, I've been trying to not leave any food uneateneat all the food.

I edited this sentence to be more concise.

I'm getting fat lately, though.

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Good on being conscious of your carbon footprint. It's good to be aware of how you're contributing to the environment.

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TOMO_o

Sept. 3, 2025

29

Thank you very much for your careful correction.
It's difficult to express things in a natural and concise way.

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marblemenow

Sept. 4, 2025

12

You're welcome. Also, I forgot to point out that you spelled environment wrong in your title.

I've been trying to use fewer plastic bags these days at the convenience store.

They used to be free of charge in Japan, but they cost 3 to 5 yen now.

I'm getting fat lately, though.

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TOMO_o

Sept. 3, 2025

29

Thank you very much for your careful correction.

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Toluwani

Sept. 4, 2025

36

You are welcome :)

Do you do anything for the emviroment?


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I've been trying to use fewer plastic bags these days at convenience store.


I've been trying to use fewer plastic bags these days at the convenience store.

I've been trying to use fewer plastic bags these days at the convenience store.

They used to be free charge in Japan, but they cost 3 to 5 yen now.


They used to be free of charge in Japan, but they cost 3 to 5 yen now.

They used to be free charge in Japan, but they cost 3 to 5three to five yen now.

For more formal writing, you write out the numbers between zero to nine.

Other than that, I've been trying to not leave any food uneaten.


Other than that, I've been trying to not leave any food uneateneat all the food.

I edited this sentence to be more concise.

I'm getting fat lately, though.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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