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TOMO_o

March 18, 2025

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Do You Believe in Ghosts?

Not really. I was scared the ghost when I was kid, but now I don't think and feel anything about it. I've watched news these days and thought that the real people is much more scary than the ghost.

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Do You Believe in Ghosts?

Not really.

I was scared theof ghosts when I was kid, but now I don't think and feel anything about ithem.

I've watchedbeen watching the news these days and thoughtink that the real people isare much more scary than the ghosts.

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Good job!

I used to be afraid of ghosts as a kid watching all those ghost hunting shows on TV. Nowadays, I'm not really afraid of them. My friends and I always joke that if ghosts were real and haunted our houses, we would simply just move out of them to a new place unlike the movie characters who stubbornly choose to stay and have the ghosts constantly harass them.

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TOMO_o

March 19, 2025

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Thank you for the careful correction.

I was scared theof ghost when I was kid, but now I don't think andbout it nor do I feel anything about it.

I've watched the news these days and I thought that the real people isare much more scary than the ghost.

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Good job! Keep it up!

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TOMO_o

March 19, 2025

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Thank you for the correction.

Do You Believe in Ghosts?

Not really.

I was scared theof ghosts when I was kid, but now I don't think andor feel anything about ithem.

I've watchedbeen watching the news these days and thought that the real people isare much more scary than the ghosts.

I've been watching fits better with "these days"

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Very good!

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TOMO_o

March 19, 2025

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Thank you for the careful correction.

I was scared theof ghosts when I was a kid, but now I don't think andor feel anything about ithem.

You need the preposition "of" when talking about fear, and "a kid" is the correct way to refer to oneself at that age.
"Or" is more appropriate here than "and" when you’re listing two things. Also, "them" refers back to "ghosts" (plural), so it’s more consistent.

I've watched news these days and thought thatbeen watching the news lately. I’ve started to think theat real people isare much more scaryier than the ghosts.

"Lately" is a more natural way to refer to recent times. Also, "the news" is typically used in this context, rather than just "news."
I changed "thought" to "started to think" for clarity and added "are" to match the plural subject "people." "Scarier" is the correct comparative form of "scary," and I removed "the" before "ghosts" for a more natural phrasing.

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Nice narration. Keep writing! As we grew older, we really realized that real people are scarier than ghosts because they can touch us.

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TOMO_o

March 19, 2025

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Thank you so much for your careful corrections. It's very encouraging.

Do You Believe in Ghosts?

Not really.

I was scared theof ghosts when I was a kid, but now I don't think and feel anything about it.

I've watch thed news these days and thoughtink that the real people isare much more scary than the ghosts.

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Keep it up!

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TOMO_o

March 19, 2025

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Thank you for the correction.

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I was scared the ghost when I was kid, but now I don't think and feel anything about it.


I was scared theof ghosts when I was a kid, but now I don't think and feel anything about it.

I was scared theof ghosts when I was a kid, but now I don't think andor feel anything about ithem.

You need the preposition "of" when talking about fear, and "a kid" is the correct way to refer to oneself at that age. "Or" is more appropriate here than "and" when you’re listing two things. Also, "them" refers back to "ghosts" (plural), so it’s more consistent.

I was scared theof ghosts when I was kid, but now I don't think andor feel anything about ithem.

I was scared theof ghost when I was kid, but now I don't think andbout it nor do I feel anything about it.

I was scared theof ghosts when I was kid, but now I don't think and feel anything about ithem.

I've watched news these days and thought that the real people is much more scary than the ghost.


I've watch thed news these days and thoughtink that the real people isare much more scary than the ghosts.

I've watched news these days and thought thatbeen watching the news lately. I’ve started to think theat real people isare much more scaryier than the ghosts.

"Lately" is a more natural way to refer to recent times. Also, "the news" is typically used in this context, rather than just "news." I changed "thought" to "started to think" for clarity and added "are" to match the plural subject "people." "Scarier" is the correct comparative form of "scary," and I removed "the" before "ghosts" for a more natural phrasing.

I've watchedbeen watching the news these days and thought that the real people isare much more scary than the ghosts.

I've been watching fits better with "these days"

I've watched the news these days and I thought that the real people isare much more scary than the ghost.

I've watchedbeen watching the news these days and thoughtink that the real people isare much more scary than the ghosts.

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