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April 21, 2025

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Distance Learning

Today's passage is about distance learning.With the development of correspondence technology,temptation of using distance learning have increased quickly.Those concerned about budget tend to trade teacher for technology.
However,the author does not agree to remove the traditional learning.In his opinions,classroom is more than a place in which a teacher interacts with students.It's a place where the glory of humanity is shown.With the traditional method of teaching,teacher can assist those are struggling and students could acquire social skills that guarantee they can be more competitive in later labor market in a collective classroom.

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Distance Learning

Today's passage is about distance learning. With the development of correspondence technology, the temptation of using distance learning haves increased quickly. Those concerned about their budget tend to trade teachers for technology.

However, the author does not agree towith remove theing traditional learning. In his opinions, the classroom is more than a place in which a teacher interacts with students. It's a place where the glory of humanity is shown. With the traditional method of teaching, teachers can assist those who are struggling and students couldan acquire social skills in a collective classroom that guarantee they can be more competitive in later in the labor market in a collective classroom.

It's not clear who the author is here. Are you summarizing a passage that you read, or are you discussing your own opinion? If it's your own opinion, you can say "However, I do not agree with removing traditional learning. In my opinion, the classroom is more than a place in which a teacher interacts with students."

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Well done!

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lonely

April 25, 2025

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Thank you! It's a summary of a passage

Distance Learning

Today's passage is about distance learning. With the development of correspondence technology, the temptation of using distance learning haves increased quickly. Those concerned about budget tend to trade teacher for technology.

However, the author does not agree to remove the traditional learning. In his opinions, the classroom is more than a place in which a teacher interacts with students. It's a place where the glory of humanity is shown. With the traditional method of teaching, the teacher can assist those who are struggling, and students couldan acquire social skills that guarantee they can be more competitive in later labor markets in a collective classroom.

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You write very well! A note to remember to add a space after commas and periods.

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lonely

April 25, 2025

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Thank you

Distance Learning


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Today's passage is about distance learning.With the development of correspondence technology,temptation of using distance learning have increased quickly.Those concerned about budget tend to trade teacher for technology.


Today's passage is about distance learning. With the development of correspondence technology, the temptation of using distance learning haves increased quickly. Those concerned about their budget tend to trade teachers for technology.

Today's passage is about distance learning. With the development of correspondence technology, the temptation of using distance learning haves increased quickly. Those concerned about budget tend to trade teacher for technology.

However,the author does not agree to remove the traditional learning.In his opinions,classroom is more than a place in which a teacher interacts with students.It's a place where the glory of humanity is shown.With the traditional method of teaching,teacher can assist those are struggling and students could acquire social skills that guarantee they can be more competitive in later labor market in a collective classroom.


However, the author does not agree towith remove theing traditional learning. In his opinions, the classroom is more than a place in which a teacher interacts with students. It's a place where the glory of humanity is shown. With the traditional method of teaching, teachers can assist those who are struggling and students couldan acquire social skills in a collective classroom that guarantee they can be more competitive in later in the labor market in a collective classroom.

It's not clear who the author is here. Are you summarizing a passage that you read, or are you discussing your own opinion? If it's your own opinion, you can say "However, I do not agree with removing traditional learning. In my opinion, the classroom is more than a place in which a teacher interacts with students."

However, the author does not agree to remove the traditional learning. In his opinions, the classroom is more than a place in which a teacher interacts with students. It's a place where the glory of humanity is shown. With the traditional method of teaching, the teacher can assist those who are struggling, and students couldan acquire social skills that guarantee they can be more competitive in later labor markets in a collective classroom.

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