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Diary: Oscars

I am proud that Ting Zhao won three Oscars for her film " "Normadland". But because of the Oscar nomination of the Hong Kong protest documentary "Do Not Split" and Zhao Ting's "bad" comments, the Oscar ceremony information was completely blocked in China.
As a fan of Nine Inch Nails, I am glad of Trent Reznor on winning the Best Score for Soul! I watched Soul on my winter vacation. Soul is a good movie, I think the best part of this film is the change of mind of the lead after he achieves success.
Today at dinner I watched "Time" which was nominated for best documentary. Although it is a black subject, it seems too melodramatic, talking only about the inability of the man in charge to reunite with his family in prison, without mentioning a word about the harm he did to others back then. However, black and white images can enhance the artistic quality.

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Diary: Oscars

I am proud that Ting Zhao won three Oscars for her film " "Normadland".

But because of the Oscar nomination ofor the Hong Kong protest documentary "Do Not Split" and Zhao Ting's "bad" comments, the Oscar ceremony information was completely blocked in China.

As a fan of Nine Inch Nails, I am glad ofwas happy to see Trent Reznor on winning the Best Score for Soul!

I watched Soul on my winter vacation.

Soul i...and I think it's a good movie,. I think the best part of thise film is the lead character's change of mind of the lead after he achieves success.

I think it flows better if you add the first part of this sentence to your previous sentence:
I watched Soul on my winter vacation and I think it's a good movie.

Today at dinner I watched "Time" which was nominated for best documentary.

Although it is a black subject, itthe subject is heavy, the movie still seemsed too melodramatic, talking only about for me, focusing too much on the inability of the man in charge to reunite with his family in prison, without mentioning a word about the harm he did to others back thentouching on the harm he inflicted on others previously.

Not sure if this is what you mean by black subject because that could have several meanings, such as the black and white video format or the black man as the main lead.

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heyyawn

April 27, 2021

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Thanks :)

Diary: Oscars

I am proud that Ting Zhao won three Oscars for her film " "Normadland".

But because of the Oscar nomination of the Hong Kong protest documentary "Do Not Split" and Zhao Ting's "bad" comments, the Oscar ceremony information was completely blocked in China.

As a fan of Nine Inch Nails, I am glad of Trent Reznor won winning the Best Score for Soul!

Alternative: "I am happy for Trent Reznor that he won". Just depends if you want to emphasise that you're happy for him specifically, or just generally glad that he won.

I watched Soul on my winter vacation.

Soul is a good movie,. I think the best part of this film is the lead's change ofin mind of the leadset after he achieves success.

"Change of mind" means you're changing your preference for something, e.g. you wanted the blue pen but you changed your mind and bought the red one instead. For changes in how you think about bigger or broader things, e.g. a political opinion or a philosophy, you would say "a change in mindset". For instance, "he followed the yellow political party but after thinking more about their policies, he had a change in his mindset and followed the purple party." It means you changed how you think about a topic, rather than a preference for one thing over another.

Today at dinner I watched "Time" which was nominated for best documentary.

Although it is a blacdark subject, it still seems too melodramatic, talking only about the inability of the man in charge to reunite with his family in prison, without mentioning a word about the harm he did to others back thenin the past.

You could say "back then" only when it's been established what time period you're talking about, e.g. "Last year he did an awful thing, and nobody talks about what he did back then."

However, black and white images can enhance the artistic quality.

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heyyawn

April 27, 2021

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Soul is a good movie,. I think the best part of this film is the lead's change ofin mind of the leadset after he achieves success.

Thank you for the explanation, learned a lot from it :)

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I am proud that Ting Zhao won three Oscars for her film " "Normadland".


I am proud that Ting Zhao won three Oscars for her film " "Normadland".

I am proud that Ting Zhao won three Oscars for her film " "Normadland".

But because of the Oscar nomination of the Hong Kong protest documentary "Do Not Split" and Zhao Ting's "bad" comments, the Oscar ceremony information was completely blocked in China.


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But because of the Oscar nomination ofor the Hong Kong protest documentary "Do Not Split" and Zhao Ting's "bad" comments, the Oscar ceremony information was completely blocked in China.

As a fan of Nine Inch Nails, I am glad of Trent Reznor on winning the Best Score for Soul!


As a fan of Nine Inch Nails, I am glad of Trent Reznor won winning the Best Score for Soul!

Alternative: "I am happy for Trent Reznor that he won". Just depends if you want to emphasise that you're happy for him specifically, or just generally glad that he won.

As a fan of Nine Inch Nails, I am glad ofwas happy to see Trent Reznor on winning the Best Score for Soul!

I watched Soul on my winter vacation.


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Soul is a good movie, I think the best part of this film is the change of mind of the lead after he achieves success.


Soul is a good movie,. I think the best part of this film is the lead's change ofin mind of the leadset after he achieves success.

"Change of mind" means you're changing your preference for something, e.g. you wanted the blue pen but you changed your mind and bought the red one instead. For changes in how you think about bigger or broader things, e.g. a political opinion or a philosophy, you would say "a change in mindset". For instance, "he followed the yellow political party but after thinking more about their policies, he had a change in his mindset and followed the purple party." It means you changed how you think about a topic, rather than a preference for one thing over another.

Soul i...and I think it's a good movie,. I think the best part of thise film is the lead character's change of mind of the lead after he achieves success.

I think it flows better if you add the first part of this sentence to your previous sentence: I watched Soul on my winter vacation and I think it's a good movie.

Today at dinner I watched "Time" which was nominated for best documentary.


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Although it is a black subject, it seems too melodramatic, talking only about the inability of the man in charge to reunite with his family in prison, without mentioning a word about the harm he did to others back then.


Although it is a blacdark subject, it still seems too melodramatic, talking only about the inability of the man in charge to reunite with his family in prison, without mentioning a word about the harm he did to others back thenin the past.

You could say "back then" only when it's been established what time period you're talking about, e.g. "Last year he did an awful thing, and nobody talks about what he did back then."

Although it is a black subject, itthe subject is heavy, the movie still seemsed too melodramatic, talking only about for me, focusing too much on the inability of the man in charge to reunite with his family in prison, without mentioning a word about the harm he did to others back thentouching on the harm he inflicted on others previously.

Not sure if this is what you mean by black subject because that could have several meanings, such as the black and white video format or the black man as the main lead.

However, black and white images can enhance the artistic quality.


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