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amanda

April 11, 2021

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Diary of a night owl 🦉

I was zonked out last night. Hopefully, all that drained energy didn't drive me up the wall. Instead, I just cried a little and stopped my childlike instincts.

I'm trying to be a good 18 year-old and understand: "Ok. My decisions aren't set in stone. Think. Pray. Go ahead", as my psychologist told me.

My mom is thinking in traveling to São Paulo.

I found out what's "grooming" is in a bad context, which creeped me out a bit. I definitely will be more careful with the strangers I talk to on social media.

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Go ahead", as my physisychologist told me.

This seems more likely. A physiologist is somebody who studies the structure of bodies and how they function, a psychologist is somebody who is an expert on the mind and our behaviour.

I found out what's "glrooming" is in a bad context, which creeped me out a bit.

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amanda

April 11, 2021

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Thank you!!! I'll correct that in my text

Have a great day! 🌺

Diary of a Nnight owl 🦉

Minor correction: watch the use of upper case in the middle of sentences

I was zonked out last night.

This is a slang so the usage might be slightly different depending on location. But in US( I think most of US), saying 'you are zonked' means you are high or on drugs. If you want to say you are tired, use 'zonked out'.

Hopefully, all that drained energy didn't drive me up the wall.

Instead, I just cried a little and stopped my childlike instincts.

I'm trying to be a good 18th year-old and understand: "ok. MOk, my decisions aren't set in stone.

Think.

Pray.

Go ahead", as my physiologist told me.

My mom is thinking inof traveling to São Paulo.

I found out what's "glooming" in a bad context, which creeped me out a bit.

I definitely will be more careful with the strangers I talk ito on social media.

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Good work.

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amanda

April 11, 2021

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wow, thank you! I had no clue that zonked would mean that hahaha 😂

Have a wonderful day! 🌺

Diary of a Night owl 🦉


Diary of a Nnight owl 🦉

Minor correction: watch the use of upper case in the middle of sentences

I was zonked last night.


I was zonked out last night.

This is a slang so the usage might be slightly different depending on location. But in US( I think most of US), saying 'you are zonked' means you are high or on drugs. If you want to say you are tired, use 'zonked out'.

Hopefully, all that drained energy didn't drive me up the wall.


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Instead, I just cried a little and stopped my childlike instincts.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm trying to be a good 18th and understand: "ok. My decisions aren't set in stone.


I'm trying to be a good 18th year-old and understand: "ok. MOk, my decisions aren't set in stone.

Think.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Pray.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Go ahead", as my physiologist told me.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Go ahead", as my physisychologist told me.

This seems more likely. A physiologist is somebody who studies the structure of bodies and how they function, a psychologist is somebody who is an expert on the mind and our behaviour.

My mom is thinking in traveling to São Paulo.


My mom is thinking inof traveling to São Paulo.

I found out what's "glooming" in a bad context, which creeped me out a bit.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I found out what's "glrooming" is in a bad context, which creeped me out a bit.

I definitely will be more careful with the strangers I talk in social media.


I definitely will be more careful with the strangers I talk ito on social media.

Diary of a night owl 🦉


I was zonked out last night.


I'm trying to be a good 18 year-old and understand: "Ok. My decisions aren't set in stone.


Go ahead", as my psychologist told me.


I found out what's "grooming" is in a bad context, which creeped me out a bit.


I definitely will be more careful with the strangers I talk to on social media.


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