May 16, 2021
Diary: Laziness
I used to write a journal after dinner and this good habit I kept for over 40 days. But after monthly challenge, I didn't know what to write about. So sometimes I cheat. Just leave a title and some sentences in a journal which is viewable by people who are mutually following each other, and then decide to rewrite it when I have time. This is the main reason I don't follow anyone... Today I found out that more than 4 journals needed to be rewritten. It's horrible. I don't want to cheat for sake of streaks. Maybe I should change my writing time to after I wake up.
Diary: Laziness
I used to write a journal after dinner, and I kept this good habit I kept for over 40 days.
But after the monthly challenge ended, I didn't know what to write about.
SoNow, sometimes I cheat.
I'm adding "now" to make it clear this is something that developed after the monthly challenge ended. Generally, in written English one should not begin a sentence with "So".
JI just leave a title and some sentences in a journal which is viewable by people who are mutually following each other, and then decide to rewrite it when I have time.
You have to begin the sentence with "I", otherwise it has no subject and therefore is not a complete sentence. "decide to" is redundant.
This is the main reason I don't follow anyone... Today I found out that more than 4four journals needed to be rewritten.
"needed" means that in the present, they no longer need rewriting. "need" means that the necessity still exists in the present. Numbers smaller than 10 should be spelled out in writing.
It's horrible.
I don't want to cheat for sake of streaks.
Maybe I should change my writing time to begin after I wake up.
This sentence does not make any sense, in relation to the rest of the essay.
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Very good! When choosing verb tenses, it's always a good idea to make sure you are properly expressing whether an action or situation has completed in the past, or is still ongoing in the present.
May 18, 2021
Thanks :)
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Diary: Laziness This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I used to write a journal after dinner and this good habit I kept for over 40 days. I used to write a journal after dinner, and I kept this good habit |
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But after monthly challenge, I didn't know what to write about. But after the monthly challenge ended, I didn't know what to write about. |
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So sometimes I cheat.
I'm adding "now" to make it clear this is something that developed after the monthly challenge ended. Generally, in written English one should not begin a sentence with "So". |
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Just leave a title and some sentences in a journal which is viewable by people who are mutually following each other, and then decide to rewrite it when I have time.
You have to begin the sentence with "I", otherwise it has no subject and therefore is not a complete sentence. "decide to" is redundant. |
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This is the main reason I don't follow anyone... Today I found out that more than 4 journals needed to be rewritten. This is the main reason I don't follow anyone. "needed" means that in the present, they no longer need rewriting. "need" means that the necessity still exists in the present. Numbers smaller than 10 should be spelled out in writing. |
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It's horrible. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I don't want to cheat for sake of streaks. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Maybe I should change my writing time to after I wake up. Maybe I should change my writing time to begin after I wake up. This sentence does not make any sense, in relation to the rest of the essay. |
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