May 6, 2021
Diary: A Disappearing Bus Stop
Something very weird happened today. A bus stop suddenly stopped being used. Every Thursday, I always walk 20 minutes to that bus stop in order to get to my part-time job. Today when I got there, the bus stop sign was still there and I saw many people waiting for the bus there. Then I opened my phone app to check the bus arrival time, but I was shocked to find that I couldn't check this stop. Checking those bus numbers on the stop sign don't show this stop. There was also no search on the web to find a notice that the station was not in use. After a short hesitation, I immediately decided to walk 10 minutes to another station to take another bus, and luckily I wasn't late for work.
Diary: A Disappearing Bus Stop
Something very weird happened today.
A bus stop suddenly stopped being used.
Every Thursday, I always walk 20 minutes to that bus stop in order to get to my part-time job.
Today when I got there, the bus stop sign was still there and I saw many people waiting for the bus there.
Then I opened my phone app to check the bus arrival time, but I was shocked to find that I couldn't check this stop.
Checking those bus numbers on the stop sign doidn't show this stop.
There was also no search on the web to find a noticeinformation on the web(site) that the station was not in use.
I'm not sure I understand exactly what you mean here, but I take this to mean you looked for information on the bus company's website and couldn't find anything.
After a shortmoment's hesitation, I immediately decided to walk 10 minutes to another station to take another bus, and luckily I wasn't late for work.
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Nicely done!
May 7, 2021
Thank you very much :)
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Something very weird happened today. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A bus stop suddenly stopped being used. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Every Thursday, I always walk 20 minutes to that bus stop in order to get to my part-time job. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Today when I got there, the bus stop sign was still there and I saw many people waiting for the bus there. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Then I opened my phone app to check the bus arrival time, but I was shocked to find that I couldn't check this stop. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Checking those bus numbers on the stop sign don't show this stop. Checking th |
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There was also no search on the web to find a notice that the station was not in use. There was also no I'm not sure I understand exactly what you mean here, but I take this to mean you looked for information on the bus company's website and couldn't find anything. |
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After a short hesitation, I immediately decided to walk 10 minutes to another station to take another bus, and luckily I wasn't late for work. After a |
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