Jan. 31, 2023
Today I went to the library as usual. I didn’t eat breakfast because I overslept. Although I didn’t eat lunch either, I felt energetic from beginning to end. I felt a little hungry two hours before I planned to go home. I was so surprised! I thought that I may feel hungry before noon. I always eat a lot of breakfast before going to the library. Then, it happens that I feel sleepy between one and two o’clock. Therefore, next time I go to the library, I will do the same thing as today. I hope I can be more productive than before.
In the end of January, I really appreciate everyone who corrected my diary before. Without your helps, I can't persist for a month and I will keep going for the following month! By the way, I will force myself to record the diary here, instead of recording on my smartphone.
Diary 1/31
Today I went to the library as usual.
I didn’t eat breakfast because I overslept.
Although I didn’t eat lunch either, I felt energetic from beginning to end.
I felt a little hungry two hours before I planned to go home.
I was so surprised!
I thought that I mayight feel hungry before noon.
"Might" is past tense for "may" in this sentence.
I always eat a lot of breakfast before going to the library.
Then, it happens that II usually feel sleepy between one and two o’clock.
Therefore, next time I go to the library, I will do the same thing as today.
I hope I can be more productive than before.
In the end of January, I really appreciate everyone who corrected my diary beforeearlier.
Without your helps, I can't persist for a month and I will keep going for the following monthwrite for more than a month. With your help, I will keep going!
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By the way, I will force myself to record themy diary here, instead of recording it on my smartphone.
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Diary 1/31
Today, I went to the library as usual.
I didn’t eat breakfast because I overslept.
Although I didn’t eat lunch either, I felt energetic from beginning to end.
I felt a little hungry two hours before I had planned to go home.
I was so surprised!
I thought that I maywould feel hungry before noon.
I always eat a lot of breakfast before going to the library.
Then, it happens that I feelt sleepy between one and two o’clock.
Therefore,So next time I go to the library, I will do the same thing as today.
"therefore" is quit formal
I hope I can be more productive than before.
InAt the end of this January, I really appreciate everyone who corrected my diary before.
Without your helps, I can'twouldn't be able to persist for a month and. I will keep going for the following month!
Diary 1/31 This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Today I went to the library as usual. Today, I went to the library as usual. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I didn’t eat breakfast because I overslept. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Although I didn’t eat lunch either, I felt energetic from beginning to end. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I felt a little hungry two hours before I planned to go home. I felt a little hungry two hours before I had planned to go home. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I was so surprised! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I thought that I may feel hungry before noon. I thought that I I thought that I m "Might" is past tense for "may" in this sentence. |
I always eat a lot of breakfast before going to the library. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Then, it happens that I feel sleepy between one and two o’clock. Then, it happens that I fe Then, |
Therefore, next time I go to the library, I will do the same thing as today.
"therefore" is quit formal This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I hope I can be more productive than before. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
In the end of January, I really appreciate everyone who corrected my diary before.
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Without your helps, I can't persist for a month and I will keep going for the following month! Without your help Without your help \o/ |
By the way, I will force myself to record the diary here, instead of recording on my smartphone. By the way, I will force myself to record |
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