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sherry0128

Jan. 31, 2023

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Diary 1/31

Today I went to the library as usual. I didn’t eat breakfast because I overslept. Although I didn’t eat lunch either, I felt energetic from beginning to end. I felt a little hungry two hours before I planned to go home. I was so surprised! I thought that I may feel hungry before noon. I always eat a lot of breakfast before going to the library. Then, it happens that I feel sleepy between one and two o’clock. Therefore, next time I go to the library, I will do the same thing as today. I hope I can be more productive than before.

In the end of January, I really appreciate everyone who corrected my diary before. Without your helps, I can't persist for a month and I will keep going for the following month! By the way, I will force myself to record the diary here, instead of recording on my smartphone.

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Diary 1/31

Today I went to the library as usual.

I didn’t eat breakfast because I overslept.

Although I didn’t eat lunch either, I felt energetic from beginning to end.

I felt a little hungry two hours before I planned to go home.

I was so surprised!

I thought that I mayight feel hungry before noon.

"Might" is past tense for "may" in this sentence.

I always eat a lot of breakfast before going to the library.

Then, it happens that II usually feel sleepy between one and two o’clock.

Therefore, next time I go to the library, I will do the same thing as today.

I hope I can be more productive than before.

In the end of January, I really appreciate everyone who corrected my diary beforeearlier.

Without your helps, I can't persist for a month and I will keep going for the following monthwrite for more than a month. With your help, I will keep going!

\o/

By the way, I will force myself to record themy diary here, instead of recording it on my smartphone.

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sherry0128

Feb. 1, 2023

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Thank you so much!

Diary 1/31

Today, I went to the library as usual.

I didn’t eat breakfast because I overslept.

Although I didn’t eat lunch either, I felt energetic from beginning to end.

I felt a little hungry two hours before I had planned to go home.

I was so surprised!

I thought that I maywould feel hungry before noon.

I always eat a lot of breakfast before going to the library.

Then, it happens that I feelt sleepy between one and two o’clock.

Therefore,So next time I go to the library, I will do the same thing as today.

"therefore" is quit formal

I hope I can be more productive than before.

InAt the end of this January, I really appreciate everyone who corrected my diary before.

Without your helps, I can'twouldn't be able to persist for a month and. I will keep going for the following month!

sherry0128's avatar
sherry0128

Feb. 1, 2023

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Thank you so much!

Diary 1/31


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today I went to the library as usual.


Today, I went to the library as usual.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I didn’t eat breakfast because I overslept.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Although I didn’t eat lunch either, I felt energetic from beginning to end.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I felt a little hungry two hours before I planned to go home.


I felt a little hungry two hours before I had planned to go home.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I was so surprised!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I thought that I may feel hungry before noon.


I thought that I maywould feel hungry before noon.

I thought that I mayight feel hungry before noon.

"Might" is past tense for "may" in this sentence.

I always eat a lot of breakfast before going to the library.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Then, it happens that I feel sleepy between one and two o’clock.


Then, it happens that I feelt sleepy between one and two o’clock.

Then, it happens that II usually feel sleepy between one and two o’clock.

Therefore, next time I go to the library, I will do the same thing as today.


Therefore,So next time I go to the library, I will do the same thing as today.

"therefore" is quit formal

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I hope I can be more productive than before.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In the end of January, I really appreciate everyone who corrected my diary before.


InAt the end of this January, I really appreciate everyone who corrected my diary before.

In the end of January, I really appreciate everyone who corrected my diary beforeearlier.

Without your helps, I can't persist for a month and I will keep going for the following month!


Without your helps, I can'twouldn't be able to persist for a month and. I will keep going for the following month!

Without your helps, I can't persist for a month and I will keep going for the following monthwrite for more than a month. With your help, I will keep going!

\o/

By the way, I will force myself to record the diary here, instead of recording on my smartphone.


By the way, I will force myself to record themy diary here, instead of recording it on my smartphone.

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