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sherry0128

Jan. 31, 2023

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Diary 1/27 & 1/28

1/27
Today I stayed at home to prepare the necessary materials for exchanging. It took me a lot of time, but I felt so happy due to being one step closer to my dream. When I was preparing, my roommate told me the information I’m excited about. It's about the exchange students from France that want to find a school buddy. The deadline will be in three days, so I need to prepare for it first. Even though the quotas are only five, I will try my best to get this golden opportunity!

1/28
Today is my birthday! I went to another city to see an animated exhibition with my besties. The animation is our childhood memory. We went to the Taipei session, but it was packed with people. In addition, most of the merchandise was out of stock. However, today we did everything that we couldn’t do at that time. We not only had the collaborative meals but also made the photo booth. It’s the best birthday gift!

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Diary 1/27 & 1/28

1/27

Today I stayed at home to prepare the necessary materials for the student exchanginge.

It took me a lot of time, but I felt so happy due to being one step closer to my dream.

Whilen I was preparing, my roommate told me the information I’m excited about.

It's about the exchange students from France thatwho want to find a school buddy.

"Who" is used with people.

The deadline will be in three days, so I need to prepare for it first.

Even though the quotas are is for only five students, I will try my best to get this golden opportunity!

Good luck!

1/28

Today is my birthday!

I went to another city to see an animated exhibition with my besties.

The animation is one of our childhood memoryies.

We went to the Taipei session, but it was packed with people.

In addition, most of the merchandise was out of stock.

HToday, however, today we did everything that we couldn’t do at that timbefore.

We not only had the collaborative meals but also madeused the photo booth.

It was the best birthday gift!

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Happy Belated Birthday! I'm glad you had a good time! Good work!

It's about the exchange students from France that wants to find a school buddy.

Today is my birthday!

Happy birthday!!!

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Happy birthday! I'm glad you had fun :)

Diary 1/27 & 1/28


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today I stayed at home to prepare the necessary materials for exchanging.


Today I stayed at home to prepare the necessary materials for the student exchanginge.

It took me a lot of time, but I felt so happy due to being one step closer to my dream.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When I was preparing, my roommate told me the information I’m excited about.


Whilen I was preparing, my roommate told me the information I’m excited about.

It's about the exchange students from France that want to find a school buddy.


It's about the exchange students from France that wants to find a school buddy.

It's about the exchange students from France thatwho want to find a school buddy.

"Who" is used with people.

The deadline will be in three days, so I need to prepare for it first.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Even though the quotas are only five, I will try my best to get this golden opportunity!


Even though the quotas are is for only five students, I will try my best to get this golden opportunity!

Good luck!

1/28


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today is my birthday!


Today is my birthday!

Happy birthday!!!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I went to another city to see an animated exhibition with my besties.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The animation is our childhood memory.


The animation is one of our childhood memoryies.

We went to the Taipei session, but it was packed with people.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In addition, most of the merchandise was out of stock.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

However, today we did everything that we couldn’t do at that time.


HToday, however, today we did everything that we couldn’t do at that timbefore.

We not only had the collaborative meals but also made the photo booth.


We not only had the collaborative meals but also madeused the photo booth.

It’s the best birthday gift!


It was the best birthday gift!

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