Jan. 31, 2023
1/25
Today we went to the department store. We seldom go to that department store even though it is near my house. It’s because there are many luxurious goods. It is boring to stay at home. Therefore, we just walked around and went window shopping. We didn’t feel our feet were aching until we went home and sat down. No wonder some of my friends asked ''Why can I walk for a long time?''
1/26
Today we went to my grandmother’s home. There is also a department store near my grandmother’s house. Its square has held a market and a book fair for a month. After lunch, we went there to find something special. Unfortunately, the sizes of them are small. But I still found some books which I’m interested in. Most of them probably can be found at the library of my university where I have studied. Hence, I will borrow them when the new semester starts.
Diary 1/25 & 1/26
1/25
Today we went to the department store.
We seldom go to that department store even though it is near my house.
It’s because there are many luxurious goods.
It is boring to stay at home.
Therefore, we just walked around and went window shopping.
We didn’t feel that our feet were aching until we wengot home and sat down.
No wonder some of my friends asked , ''WhyHow can Iyou walk for such a long time?''
This is more how we would say it in the US.
1/26
Today we went to my grandmother’s home.
There is also a department store near my grandmother’s house.
Its square has held a market and a book fair for a month.
After lunch, we went there to find something special.
Unfortunately, the sizes of them are small clothes were too small but I still found some books in which I’m interested.
I'm not sure what you meant so this is my best guess.
or,
- Unfortunately, the sizes of the clothes were too small but I still found some books which I found interesting.
- Unfortunately, the sizes of the clothes were too small but I still found some books which interested me.
But I still found some books which I’m interested in.
This is a sentence fragment.
Most of them probably can be found at the library of my university where I have studiedbeen studying.
You're still studying at university, right?
Hence, I will borrow them when the new semester starts.
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It sounds as if you had a fun time. Good work!
Diary 1/25 & 1/26
1/25
Today we went to the department store.
We seldom go to that department store, even though it is near my house.
It’s because there are many luxurious goods.
It is boring to stay at home.
Therefore, we just walked around and went window shopping.
We didn’t feelrealise our feet were aching until we went home and sat down.
Or: "we didn't feel our feet aching until we went home and sat down."
No wonder some of my friends asked ''Why: ''How can I walk for a long time?''
They want to know "how you are able to do something", not "why do you do something".
1/26
Today we went to my grandmother’s home.
There is also a department store near my grandmother’s house.
Its square has held a market and a book fair for a month.
After lunch, we went there to find something special.
Unfortunately, the sizes of them aremarket and fair were only small.
Alternatively: "Unfortunately they were only small", but the subject isn't clear (you could also be talking about your lunch!).
But I still found some books which I’mthat I was interested in.
Although you (hopefully!) are still interested in them, you are talking about something that happened in the past (finding the books).
Most of them can probably can be found at the library of my university where I have studiedy.
You are still studying, so this should be present tense.
HenceSo, I will borrow them when the new semester starts.
"Hence" is too strong here. You could still buy the books, even though they are available in the library (maybe you want to own your own copy!).
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Great writing, these are only small mistakes!
Unfortunately, the sizes of them are small. Unfortunately, the Alternatively: "Unfortunately they were only small", but the subject isn't clear (you could also be talking about your lunch!). Unfortunately, the sizes of the I'm not sure what you meant so this is my best guess. or, - Unfortunately, the sizes of the clothes were too small but I still found some books which I found interesting. - Unfortunately, the sizes of the clothes were too small but I still found some books which interested me. |
But I still found some books which I’m interested in. But I still found some books Although you (hopefully!) are still interested in them, you are talking about something that happened in the past (finding the books).
This is a sentence fragment. |
Most of them probably can be found at the library of my university where I have studied. Most of them can probably You are still studying, so this should be present tense. Most of them probably can be found at the library of my university where I have You're still studying at university, right? |
Hence, I will borrow them when the new semester starts.
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