Jan. 31, 2023
Diary 1/21 &1/22
1/21
Today is New Year’s Eve! I always clean my great-grandmother's house with my family before noon. And then we played UNO after lunch. UNO is an extremely interesting table game. At first, I just played with my brothers and sisters because my aunts and uncles didn't understand how to play. When we had had fun and they had just seen for a while, we invited them to play together. Now, they play better and better than before! Next goal is let my grandparents accept our invitation. By the way, we enjoy a reunion dinner on this day. We ordered New Year dishes this year. They are flavorful,so perhaps next year we will also order them instead of cooking for ourselves.
1/22
Today is the first day of the Lunar New Year. Everyone will go out to another city with their family. When I was a child, our family went out on this day. As we get older, we don’t go to the tourist attractions because there are so many people. Therefore, we play mahjong at home. It’s been a long time since I've played mahjong. In the first round, I had four white boards. They should not discard, but I forgot the rule. When my father saw I discarded them, he laughed at me, and when my mother understood what happened, she also laughed at me! I self-draw won after about two hours. Mahjong is a really interesting table game!
Diary 1/21 &1/22
1/21
Today is New Year’s Eve!
I always clean my great-grandmother's house with my family before noon.
And thenThis year we played UNO after lunch.
I can't tell if you play UNO every year after lunch. This correction is to switch from the general "I always clean ..." to what you've just done.
UNO is an extremely interesting table game.
At first, I just played with my brothers and sisters because my aunts and uncles didn't understand how to play.
When we had had fun and they had just seenwatched for a while, we invited them to play togetherwith us.
Now, they play better and better than before!
NMy next goal is letto have my grandparents accept our invitation.
By the way, we enjoy a reunion dinner on this day.
We ordered New Year dishes this year.
They awere flavorful,tasty, so perhaps next year we will also order them instead of cooking for ourselves.
1/22
Today is the first day of the Lunar New Year.
Everyone will go outtravel to another city to spend time with their family.
When I was a child, our family went outtraveled on this day.
As we get older, we don’t go to the tourist attractions any more because there are so many people.
Therefore, we play mahjong at home.
It’s been a long time since I've played mahjong.
In the first round, I had four white boards.
They should not be discarded, but I forgot the rule.
When my father saw Ithat I had discarded them, he laughed at me, and, when my mother understood what happened, she also laughed at me!
I self-draew wothe win after about two hours.
haha! yay!
Mahjong is a really interesting table game!
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I haven't played mahjong for a few years. I miss it! Good work!
Today is New Year’s Eve!
I always cleaned my great-grandmother's house with my family before noon, as we always do on New Year’s Eve.
This fits better with the sentences that follow it.
And then we played UNO after lunch.
UNO is an extremely interesting table game.
At first, I just played with my brothers and sisters because my aunts and uncles didn't understand how to play.
When we had had fun and they had just [seen us playing | watched] for a while, we invited them to play togetherwith us.
If they were actively watching you play, use “watched.” If they weren’t really paying attention, use “seen us playing.”
“To play together” sounds like they would play with each other but not with you guys.
Now, they play better and better than before!
NOur next goal is lto get my grandparents to accept our invitation. (to join us).
By the way, we enjoyed / had a reunion dinner on this day.
We ordered takeout New Year dishes this year.
They awere flavorful, so perhaps next year we will also [order them | order in] instead of cooking for ourselves.
“Order them” sounds like you would order the exact same dishes next year.
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