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April 15, 2025

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diary 04/15

hello, friends now I am going talking about my family, my parents are from Maranhão and Espirito Santo, today we lives in Pará, in total we have 4 brothers, 2 sisters and 2 brothers, in my case I 'm the yonguest between mens, my brothers is a mecanic, my sisters is recepcionist, my older sisters is a street food vendor, I have many people in my family this is the true, but I also have family in Minas Gerais and my family is easygoing.


"Olá, amigos! Agora vou falar sobre a minha família. Meus pais são do Maranhão e do Espírito Santo. Hoje, moramos no Pará. No total, somos quatro irmãos: duas irmãs e dois irmãos. Eu sou o mais novo entre os meninos.

Um dos meus irmãos é mecânico, uma das minhas irmãs é recepcionista, e minha irmã mais velha é vendedora ambulante de comida. Tenho uma família grande — é verdade! Também tenho parentes em Minas Gerais, e minha família é tranquila."

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dDiary 04/15

hHello, friends now I a. I'm going to talking about my family, m. My parents are from Maranhão and Espirito Santo, t. Today we lives in Pará, i. In total we havare 4 brothers,siblings: 2 sisters, and 2 brothers, i. In my case I 'm the younguest between mens, mof the men. My brothers is a mechanic, my sisters is a recepctionist, and my older sisters is also a street food vendor,. I have many people in my family this is the, true, but I also have family in Minas Gerais and my family iswe're easygoing.

Using the word "now" in "now I am going" in this context isn't incorrect, but it feels abrupt. I would only use "now" at the beginning of a phrase if I had been talking about something before and I wanted to change subjects.

When using "going" to describe future actions, we usually use a verb after "going" in the form "to ____", not "_____ing". So, "I'm going to talk", not "I'm going talking". This is a bit unnatural.

Verbs can only end in "s" after third person pronouns: "he", "she", or "it". There is no "s" at the end of a verb after "I", "you", "we", or "they". "I live, you live, he lives, we live, they live."

In English, when talking about a group of multiple brothers and sisters, I would use the word "siblings." This word doesn't have gender and simply means anyone, brother or sister, who has your same parents. Saying "brothers" to refer to a group of both brothers and sisters is very strange, to me at least.

"I'm the youngest between men" is a very unnatural phrase. I think you mean "youngest OF THE men."
Also, "men" is an irregular noun: the singular is "man" but the plural is "men", without an "s". English has quite a few of these, unfortunately.

"Brothers" means you are talking about multiple brothers. If you are only talking about one, use "brother", without an "s". Same applies to "sister" and "older sister".

"this is the true" is a very odd phrase. In this context, it would be better to say "this is true", or simply "true". I also highly recommend using a comma before and after "this is true".

"...and my family is easygoing" isn't wrong at all, but since you have mentioned your family before, you can also simply say "...and we're easygoing."

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I would recommend using periods instead of commas to separate ideas that aren't directly related to each other. It will make you sound more natural, and it also makes it easier to review in LangCorrect. It tries to separate each part of a journal by sentences, but it thinks this entire text is one long, giant sentence.

Also, I see you're struggling just a little with spelling. English is quite inconsistent with its spelling, and even I'll misspell words from time to time despite being a native speaker. Depending on what web browser or service you're using to access this website, you might have an option to enable spell-checking for English, if that would help.

Anyway, sorry if that was a lot to read! But I hope it could help, and I wish you the best in your study of English!

diary 04/15

hHello, friends n! Now I am going to talking about my family, m. My parents are from Maranhão and Espirito Santo, todaynow we lives in Pará, in total we have 4 brothers,. We are 4 siblings - 2 sisters and 2 brothers, in my case; I 'm the yonguest between mens, my brothers is a mecanic, my younger sisters is a recepctionist, my older sisters is a street food vendor,. I have many people in my family this is the trueth, but I also have family in Minas Gerais and my family is easy going.

hHello, friends now! I am going talkingo write about my family, m. My parents are from Maranhão and Espirito Santo, today w. We lives in Pará, i. In total we, I have 4 brothersiblings, 2 sisters and 2 brothers, i. In my case, I 'm the younguest between mens, my brothers. My brothers is a mechanic, m. My sisters is a recepctionist, and my older sisters is a street food vendor,. I have many people in my family this is the true, but. I also have family in Minas Gerais and m. My family is easygoing.

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dDiary 04/15

hello, friends now I am going talking about my family, my parents are from Maranhão and Espirito Santo, today we lives in Pará, in total we have 4 brothers, 2 sisters and 2 brothers, in my case I 'm the yonguest between mens, my brothers is a mecanic, my sisters is recepcionist, my older sisters is a street food vendor, I have many people in my family this is the true, but I also have family in Minas Gerais and my family is easygoing.


hHello, friends now! I am going talkingo write about my family, m. My parents are from Maranhão and Espirito Santo, today w. We lives in Pará, i. In total we, I have 4 brothersiblings, 2 sisters and 2 brothers, i. In my case, I 'm the younguest between mens, my brothers. My brothers is a mechanic, m. My sisters is a recepctionist, and my older sisters is a street food vendor,. I have many people in my family this is the true, but. I also have family in Minas Gerais and m. My family is easygoing.

hHello, friends n! Now I am going to talking about my family, m. My parents are from Maranhão and Espirito Santo, todaynow we lives in Pará, in total we have 4 brothers,. We are 4 siblings - 2 sisters and 2 brothers, in my case; I 'm the yonguest between mens, my brothers is a mecanic, my younger sisters is a recepctionist, my older sisters is a street food vendor,. I have many people in my family this is the trueth, but I also have family in Minas Gerais and my family is easy going.

hHello, friends now I a. I'm going to talking about my family, m. My parents are from Maranhão and Espirito Santo, t. Today we lives in Pará, i. In total we havare 4 brothers,siblings: 2 sisters, and 2 brothers, i. In my case I 'm the younguest between mens, mof the men. My brothers is a mechanic, my sisters is a recepctionist, and my older sisters is also a street food vendor,. I have many people in my family this is the, true, but I also have family in Minas Gerais and my family iswe're easygoing.

Using the word "now" in "now I am going" in this context isn't incorrect, but it feels abrupt. I would only use "now" at the beginning of a phrase if I had been talking about something before and I wanted to change subjects. When using "going" to describe future actions, we usually use a verb after "going" in the form "to ____", not "_____ing". So, "I'm going to talk", not "I'm going talking". This is a bit unnatural. Verbs can only end in "s" after third person pronouns: "he", "she", or "it". There is no "s" at the end of a verb after "I", "you", "we", or "they". "I live, you live, he lives, we live, they live." In English, when talking about a group of multiple brothers and sisters, I would use the word "siblings." This word doesn't have gender and simply means anyone, brother or sister, who has your same parents. Saying "brothers" to refer to a group of both brothers and sisters is very strange, to me at least. "I'm the youngest between men" is a very unnatural phrase. I think you mean "youngest OF THE men." Also, "men" is an irregular noun: the singular is "man" but the plural is "men", without an "s". English has quite a few of these, unfortunately. "Brothers" means you are talking about multiple brothers. If you are only talking about one, use "brother", without an "s". Same applies to "sister" and "older sister". "this is the true" is a very odd phrase. In this context, it would be better to say "this is true", or simply "true". I also highly recommend using a comma before and after "this is true". "...and my family is easygoing" isn't wrong at all, but since you have mentioned your family before, you can also simply say "...and we're easygoing."

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