Dec. 9, 2025
-Hi Sandra, what would You like to do?
-Hi Michelle, I'd like to go jogging in the park, it's a long time that we don't doing exercise.
Sandra: it's a good idea, how about if we take Tony, my dog.
Michelle: great! Tony he's very quiet , I think that He'll got a good time and be good company.
Sandra: what else will we need to bring?
Michelle: I think we'll need plenty of water, sunscreen, and ours phones.
Sandra: oh, by the way let's take some oranges and bananas.
Michelle: okie, so let's go , the day it's beautiful.
Dialogue between friends
-Hi, Sandra, w! What would Yyou like to do?
That was almost perfect, it just needed an adjustment of punctuation.
Hi, Michelle,! I'd like to go jogging in the park, it's a long timwe that we don't doing exercisven't been exercising for a long time.
I understood what you were trying to say, but it didn't sound natural.
Sandra: iThat's a good idea, how about if we take Tony, my dog.?
Again, just some phrasing and punctuation.
Michelle: gGreat!
Tony he'is very quiet , I think that He'll gothe will have a good time and be good company.
Sandra: wWhat else will we need to bring?
Just remember to capitalize the beginning of a sentence!
Michelle: I think we'll need plenty of water, sunscreen, and ours phones.
Sandra: oOh, by the way let's take some oranges and bananas.
This sounds more natural.
Michelle: okie, soOkay, let's go , the day it's beautiful.
Feedback
I understood everything you were trying to express, and the corrections were mostly to make more natural phrasing and sentence construction.
-Hi Sandra, what would Yyou like to do?
Hi Michelle, I'd like to go jogging in the park, i. It's been a long time that we don't doingsince we've exercised.
Sandra: iThat's a good idea, how about if we take Tony, my dog., Tony?
Michelle: gGreat!
Tony he'is very quiet , I think that Hhe'll gothave a good time and be good company.
Sandra: wWhat else will we need to bring?
Michelle: I think we'll need plenty of water, sunscreen, and ours phones.
Sandra: oOh, by the way, let's take some oranges and bananas.
A more natural way to write this would be "Oh, let's take some oranges and bananas too."
Michelle: oOkie, so let's go , the day it'ss so beautiful.
"Okie" is correct, though it's usually used more in the colloquial phrase "okie dokie". "OK" is another option that is more common.
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-Hi Sandra, what would You like to do? -Hi Sandra, what would -Hi, Sandra That was almost perfect, it just needed an adjustment of punctuation. |
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Hi Michelle, I'd like to go jogging in the park, it's a long time that we don't doing exercise. Hi Michelle, I'd like to go jogging in the park Hi, Michelle I understood what you were trying to say, but it didn't sound natural. |
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Sandra: it's a good idea, how about if we take Tony, my dog. Sandra: Sandra: Again, just some phrasing and punctuation. |
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Michelle: great! Michelle: Michelle: |
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Tony he's very quiet , I think that He'll got a good time and be good company. Tony Tony |
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Sandra: what else will we need to bring? Sandra: Sandra: Just remember to capitalize the beginning of a sentence! |
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Michelle: I think we'll need plenty of water, sunscreen, and ours phones. Michelle: I think we'll need plenty of water, sunscreen, and our Michelle: I think we'll need plenty of water, sunscreen, and our |
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Sandra: oh, by the way let's take some oranges and bananas. Sandra: A more natural way to write this would be "Oh, let's take some oranges and bananas too." Sandra: This sounds more natural. |
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Michelle: okie, so let's go , the day it's beautiful. Michelle: "Okie" is correct, though it's usually used more in the colloquial phrase "okie dokie". "OK" is another option that is more common. Michelle: |
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