Every day, I try to anticipate how he{Dexter | the main character} will act and live with his dark passenger.

Everyday (one word) is an adjective meaning "ordinary" or "common," while every day (two words) is an adverbial phrase meaning "each day" or "daily."

I started to watch Dexter TV series like a month ago, and now I can't stop watching because it's very interesting.

Everyday I try to anticipate how he will act and live with his dark passenger.

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The minus that I have,only negative thing I have to say about it is just onlythe naked moments that I can't control, so I don't watch them on my way to work.

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When I finish it, I will write my opinion about this show.,

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I started to watch "Dexter TV series like" about a month ago, and now I can't stop watching because it's very interesting.

We typically wouldn't say "TV series" after the title of something. Here, you can assume that people know what you're referencing. I put the title in quotation marks to make it clear that it is a title. If you wanted to be sure, you could add an extra sentence that says, "Dexter is a popular TV series" or something like that.

Everyday, I try to anticipate how he will act and live with his "dark passenger."

I'm also putting "dark passenger" in quotes here since it refers to something that Dexter calls it on the show.

I don't want to spoiler there anything, but the funny things that theiest memes comes from Dexter.

Here, you would say "spoil".
Spoil = verb
Spoiler = noun

Just touched up some of your wording for the second half of the sentence.

The minus that I have, just onlyI don't like the naked moments that I can't controlanticipate, so I don't watch them on my way to work.

Hmm, I'm not exactly sure what you meant here. I think you're using "minus" to refer to something that you don't like. We typically wouldn't use "minus" in that way. Do you mean you don't like the scenes that show nudity? I changed "control" to "anticipate" - that's a word that captures it a bit better.

I really love Debra, h. Her character is really strong, and good looking, and yes she. She does have problems with a man.

I made this into a few different sentences to prevent it becoming a run-on.

(Not only ther brother)

I probably wouldn't use parentheses here. I would maybe instead use a dash: "She does have problems with a man - not only her brother".

When I finish it, I will write my opinion about this show.

Since this is something happening in the future, you want to use "will + verb". Here, it's "I will write my opinion".

But now, I'm trying to keep up to dowith everything.

I started to watch Dextering the TV series likeDexter around a month ago, n. Now, I can't stop watching it, because it's very interesting.

Everyday, I try to anticipate how heDexter will act and live with his dark passenger.

In this case, it isn't immediately clear to someone who is reading this, but doesn't watch the show who "he" refers to. Use a noun first ("Dexter" in this case), and then you can use pronouns afterwards.

I don't want to spoiler there anything, but the funny things thatin the memes comes from Dexter.

The minus that I have, just only naked moments that I can't controlMy only complaint is that the show has moments where the actors are naked, so I don't watch them show on my way to work.

If I am correctly guessing what you intended to write, this is one way to clearly phrase it.

I really love Debra, h. Her character is really strong, and good looking, and yeslthough she haves problems with a man (and not only with her brother).

(Not only the brother)

When I finish it, Ially finish this show, I will write my opinion about ithis show.

But for now, I'm just trying to keep up to dowith everything.