April 7, 2021
Describing about my house
I am living in an apartment where is 23 floors in a building.
There are three bedrooms, one big living room and one kitchen in my apartment
This is ordinary type of apartments in Korea.
In the center, the living room is to the south side and the kitchen is to the north side.
Left side of the living room, there are two bedrooms that are the biggest one and the smallest one.
The bigt bedroom is for my three sons whose desks are in the room.
The small bedroom is originally for guest, but I usually use it for my restroom.
The middle side room that is right side of the living room is for my wife and me.
There are many books and computer for our couple.
If I have a chance, I want to move more bigger apartment that has four bedrooms.
Because my sons want to their own rooms.
I hope the day will be come soon.
Describing about my house
I am livinglive in an apartment, where isthere are 23 floors in a building.
There are three bedrooms, one big living room and one kitchen in my apartment
This is an ordinary type of apartments in Korea.
InFrom the center, the living room is to the south side and the kitchen is to the north side.
Left sideTo the left of the living room, there are two bedrooms thatwhich are the biggest one and the smallest one.
The biggest bedroom is for my three sons whose desks are in the room.
The small bedroom iwas originally for guests, but I usually use it foras my restroom.
The middle side room that is at the right side of the living room is for my wife and me.
There are many books and computers for our coupleus.
If I have a chance, I want to move moreto a bigger apartment, that has four bedrooms.
Because my sons want to their own rooms.
I hope the day will be come soon.
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April 7, 2021
Very good!! Little mistakes!!’
April 7, 2021
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April 7, 2021
You’re welcome!!! 😊
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I am living in an apartment where is 23 floors in a building. I |
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There are three bedrooms, one big living room and one kitchen in my apartment This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This is ordinary type of apartments in Korea. This is an ordinary type of apartment |
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In the center, the living room is to the south side and the kitchen is to the north side.
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Left side of the living room, there are two bedrooms that are the biggest one and the smallest one.
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The bigt bedroom is for my three sons whose desks are in the room. The biggest bedroom is for my three sons whose desks are in the room. |
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The small bedroom is originally for guest, but I usually use it for my restroom. The small bedroom |
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The middle side room that is right side of the living room is for my wife and me. The middle |
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There are many books and computer for our couple. There are many books and computers for |
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If I have a chance, I want to move more bigger apartment that has four bedrooms. If I have a chance, I want to move |
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Because my sons want to their own rooms. Because my sons want |
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I hope the day will be come soon. I hope the day will |
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