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TOMO_o

April 18, 2025

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Describe How Your Room Looks Right Now.

I'm embarrassed to say this, my room is cluttered. I've tried to tidy up many times, and always failed. I think even empty cardboard box will be used for something. I haven't used for anything so far.

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I'm embarrassed to say this, but my room is cluttered.

I've tried to tidy up many times, and have always failed.

I think that even empty cardboard box willcan be used for something.

I haven't used them for anything so far.

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TOMO_o

April 19, 2025

15

Thank you for the careful correction.

Describe How Your Room Looks Right Now.

I'm embarrassed to say this, but my room is cluttered.

I've tried to tidy it up many times, and have always failed.

I think even the empty cardboard boxes will be used for something.

I haven't used them for anything so far.

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TOMO_o

April 19, 2025

15

Thank you for the careful correction.

I'm embarrassed to say this, but my room is cluttered.

I've tried to tidy up many times, and have always failed.

I think even the empty cardboard boxes will be used for something.

Better sentence would be: I have a pile of cardboard boxes that I think I will use someday

, but I haven't used them / it (if your talking about 1 box) for anything so far.

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Corrected: I'm embarrassed to say this, but my room is cluttered. I've tried to tidy up many times, and have always failed. I have a pile of cardboard boxes that I think I will use someday, but I haven't used them for anything so far.

Overall very good vocabulary but I understand complex sentences can be hard to structure ;( . Well done nonetheless!

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TOMO_o

April 19, 2025

15

Thank you very much for the careful correction.

Describe How Your Room Looks Right Now.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm embarrassed to say this, my room is cluttered.


I'm embarrassed to say this, but my room is cluttered.

I'm embarrassed to say this, but my room is cluttered.

I'm embarrassed to say this, but my room is cluttered.

I've tried to tidy up many times, and always failed.


I've tried to tidy up many times, and have always failed.

I've tried to tidy it up many times, and have always failed.

I've tried to tidy up many times, and have always failed.

I think even empty cardboard box will be used for something.


I think even the empty cardboard boxes will be used for something.

Better sentence would be: I have a pile of cardboard boxes that I think I will use someday

I think even the empty cardboard boxes will be used for something.

I think that even empty cardboard box willcan be used for something.

I haven't used for anything so far.


, but I haven't used them / it (if your talking about 1 box) for anything so far.

I haven't used them for anything so far.

I haven't used them for anything so far.

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