Sept. 3, 2025
Departure Mail
we joined EY International in August 2023 and tried to attend many monthly-meeting. It was really great experience for us to be in Malaga in which 2023 Summit was held. Since then, we were not able to attend annual meeting held in USA as we could not find an avaliable visa appointment, and will not be able to attend the other meeting in Cyprus due to diplomatic issues between Turkey and Cyprus. we are way too upset at not being to able join these summits
Additionally, we could not contribute EY International such as not refering our network to a client who want to operate a business in a country where one of our member is present.
Therefore, we would like you to approve our departure from EY International Network as soon as possible.
wWe joined EY International in August 2023 and tried to attend many monthly- meeting.s.
It was really great experience for us to be in Malaga in which the 2023 Summit was held.
Since then, we were not able to attend any annual meetings held in the USA as we could not find an avalilable visa appointment, and so will not be able to attend the other meeting in Cyprus due to diplomatic issues between Turkey and Cyprus.
wWe are way tooreally upset at not being to able join these summits
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Additionally, we could not contribute EY International such aslike not referring our network to a client who wanted to operate a business in a country where one of our members is present.
"way too" means that you shouldn't be as upset as you are whereas "really" just emphasises that you're upset.
Therefore, we would like you to approve our departurefor our departure to be approved from EY International Network as soon as possible.
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Really great job with your English!
wWe joined EY International in August 2023 and tried to attend many monthly-meetings.
It was a really great experience for us to be in Malaga in which, where the 2023 Summit was held.
Since then, we were non't able to attend the annual meeting held in the USA as we could not find an avaliable visa appointment, and will not be able to attend the other meeting in Cyprus due to diplomatic issues between Turkey and Cyprus.
wWe are way too upset at not being to ablevery upset that we are not able to join these summits
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Additionally, we could non't contribute EY International, such as not refering our network to a client who wants to operate a business in a country where one of our members is present.
The first sentence was too informal. The second sentence is a bit unclear.
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Is this supposed to be a formal letter where you leave this organization ? I'm not sure I understood.
I'd say pay attention to capitalization, plurals, and be more direct and concise.
Sept. 4, 2025
Yes it is. The text should be a letter for leaving an organization.
By the way, thank you for your support.
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we joined EY International in August 2023 and tried to attend many monthly-meeting.
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It was really great experience for us to be in Malaga in which 2023 Summit was held. It was a really great experience for us to be in Malaga It was really great experience for us to be in Malaga in which the 2023 Summit was held. |
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Since then, we were not able to attend annual meeting held in USA as we could not find an avaliable visa appointment, and will not be able to attend the other meeting in Cyprus due to diplomatic issues between Turkey and Cyprus. Since then, we were Since then, we were not able to attend any annual meetings held in the USA as we could not find an ava |
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we are way too upset at not being to able join these summits Additionally, we could not contribute EY International such as not refering our network to a client who want to operate a business in a country where one of our member is present.
The first sentence was too informal. The second sentence is a bit unclear.
"way too" means that you shouldn't be as upset as you are whereas "really" just emphasises that you're upset. |
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Therefore, we would like you to approve our departure from EY International Network as soon as possible. Therefore, we would like |
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