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Day nine: weekends - road trip - Part Four

Sea caves are popular places on the Island, it is a bit further than Ayia Napa. There is a beautiful view of the blue transparent water and natural caves on the cliffs.
Some brave people jump down into the water from cliffs but even for me it looks dangerous.
We observed only the upper part, it was a shame that they were scared to go down the rocks to observe caves in the water.

The next stop was the Blue Lagoon, the water looked deeper and the waves were stronger. Like a fan of taking pictures of nature and especially people in nature, I enjoyed filming silhouettes of friends and a dog against the sun or waves.

The sun was going down but none of this place looked good enough for them to swim, hence we went to the Nissi beach.
I don't like beaches, don't like getting sunbath and I'm not swimming at all.
I know how, I used to swim in childhood but since the age of 14-16, I can't stop thinking of germs and things that are in the water. I am not scared of germs but scared of consequences what if I get sick and become disabled? Death scared me less than to be depended on by people. However, it is still okay for me to walk into the water till my shorts end but not to dive.

Unexpectedly, for the first time in my life, I enjoyed lying down on the sunbed, watching the sea and playing with the dog.
The sun was almost gone, so it wasn't burning, the sand wasn't hot, and it wasn't crowded.
By Murphy's law, when I relaxed, they came back frozen and dragged me back home.
The weekend turned out to be eventful I got new emotions, new friends, and stories to tell.

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Day nine: weekends - road trip - Part Four

Sea caves are popular places on the Island, it is a bit further than Ayia Napa.

There is a beautiful view of the blue transparent water and natural caves on the cliffs.

Some brave people jump down into the water from cliffs but even for me it looks dangerous.

We observed only the upper part, (of the cliffs?), but it was a shame that they were scared to go down the rocks toand observe caves in the waterthe sea caves.

Like a fan ofI love taking pictures of nature and, especially people in nature, I enjoyedictures of others, that's why I filminged silhouettes of friends and a dogs against the sun or waves.

The sun was going down but none ofand this place looked good enough for them to swim, hence(the cliffs?) was beginning to look pretty dangerous, so we went to the Nissi beach.

I think you have to specify what place:)

I don't like beaches, I don't like getting sunbath andurnt so I'm not swimming at all.

I think you meant sunburnt?

I know how, I used to swim in childhooback when I was a child but since the age of 14-16, I caouldn't stop thinking of germs and things that are in the water.

I am not scared of germs but scared of the consequences. Like what if I get sick and become disabled?

Death scared me less than to be depended on by people.

However, it is still okay for me to walk intogo in until the water tillouches my shorts end, but not to dive.

Unexpectedly, for the first time in my life, I enjoyed lying down on the sunbed, watching the sea and playing with the dog.

The sun was almost gone, so it wasn't burning, the sand wasn't hot, and it wasn't crowded.

The weekend turned out to be eventful; I got new emotions, new friends, and stories to tell.

Day nine: weekends - road trip - Part Four

Sea caves are popular places on the Island, it isthey are a bit further thanbeyond Ayia Napa.

There is a beautiful view of the blue transparent water and natural caves on the cliffs.

Some brave people jump down into the water from the cliffs, but even for me it looks too dangerous.

We observed only the upper part, it. I was a shame that theywe were scared to go down the rocks to observe the caves in the water.

The next stop was the Blue Lagoon, t. The water looked deeper and the waves were stronger.

LikeI'm a fan of taking pictures of nature and especially people in nature,. I enjoyed filming silhouettes of friends and a dog against the sun or waves.

The sun was going down but none of this place looked good enough for themus to swim, henceso we went to the Nissi beach.

I don't like beaches, don't like getting sunbath or sun-tanning and I'm not at swimming at all.

I know how,. I used to swim in my childhood, but since the age of 14-16, I can'thaven't been able to stop thinking of germs and things that are in the water.

I am not scared of germs but scared of the consequences what if I get sick and become disabled?

Death scareds me less than to bebeing dependednt on by people.

However, it is still okay for me to walk into the water tillup to my shorts end, but not to dive.

Unexpectedly, for the first time in my life, I enjoyed lying down on the sunbed, watching the sea and playing with the dog.

The sun was almost gone, so it wasn't burning, t. The sand wasn't hot, and it wasn't crowded.

By Murphy's law, when I relaxed, they (?) came back frozen and dragged me back home.

Who's "they"? Your friends? And why would they be frozen?

The weekend turned out to be eventful. I gofelt new emotions, made new friends, and discovered new stories to tell.

Day nine: weekends - road trip - Part Four


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Sea caves are popular places on the Island, it is a bit further than Ayia Napa.


Sea caves are popular places on the Island, it isthey are a bit further thanbeyond Ayia Napa.

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There is a beautiful view of the blue transparent water and natural caves on the cliffs.


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Some brave people jump down into the water from cliffs but even for me it looks dangerous.


Some brave people jump down into the water from the cliffs, but even for me it looks too dangerous.

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We observed only the upper part, it was a shame that they were scared to go down the rocks to observe caves in the water.


We observed only the upper part, it. I was a shame that theywe were scared to go down the rocks to observe the caves in the water.

We observed only the upper part, (of the cliffs?), but it was a shame that they were scared to go down the rocks toand observe caves in the waterthe sea caves.

The next stop was the Blue Lagoon, the water looked deeper and the waves were stronger.


The next stop was the Blue Lagoon, t. The water looked deeper and the waves were stronger.

Like a fan of taking pictures of nature and especially people in nature, I enjoyed filming silhouettes of friends and a dog against the sun or waves.


LikeI'm a fan of taking pictures of nature and especially people in nature,. I enjoyed filming silhouettes of friends and a dog against the sun or waves.

Like a fan ofI love taking pictures of nature and, especially people in nature, I enjoyedictures of others, that's why I filminged silhouettes of friends and a dogs against the sun or waves.

The sun was going down but none of this place looked good enough for them to swim, hence we went to the Nissi beach.


The sun was going down but none of this place looked good enough for themus to swim, henceso we went to the Nissi beach.

The sun was going down but none ofand this place looked good enough for them to swim, hence(the cliffs?) was beginning to look pretty dangerous, so we went to the Nissi beach.

I think you have to specify what place:)

I don't like beaches, don't like getting sunbath and I'm not swimming at all.


I don't like beaches, don't like getting sunbath or sun-tanning and I'm not at swimming at all.

I don't like beaches, I don't like getting sunbath andurnt so I'm not swimming at all.

I think you meant sunburnt?

I know how, I used to swim in childhood but since the age of 14-16, I can't stop thinking of germs and things that are in the water.


I know how,. I used to swim in my childhood, but since the age of 14-16, I can'thaven't been able to stop thinking of germs and things that are in the water.

I know how, I used to swim in childhooback when I was a child but since the age of 14-16, I caouldn't stop thinking of germs and things that are in the water.

I am not scared of germs but scared of consequences what if I get sick and become disabled?


I am not scared of germs but scared of the consequences what if I get sick and become disabled?

I am not scared of germs but scared of the consequences. Like what if I get sick and become disabled?

Death scared me less than to be depended on by people.


Death scareds me less than to bebeing dependednt on by people.

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However, it is still okay for me to walk into the water till my shorts end but not to dive.


However, it is still okay for me to walk into the water tillup to my shorts end, but not to dive.

However, it is still okay for me to walk intogo in until the water tillouches my shorts end, but not to dive.

Unexpectedly, for the first time in my life, I enjoyed lying down on the sunbed, watching the sea and playing with the dog.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Unexpectedly, for the first time in my life, I enjoyed lying down on the sunbed, watching the sea and playing with the dog.

The sun was almost gone, so it wasn't burning, the sand wasn't hot, and it wasn't crowded.


The sun was almost gone, so it wasn't burning, t. The sand wasn't hot, and it wasn't crowded.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

By Murphy's law, when I relaxed, they came back frozen and dragged me back home.


By Murphy's law, when I relaxed, they (?) came back frozen and dragged me back home.

Who's "they"? Your friends? And why would they be frozen?

The weekend turned out to be eventful I got new emotions, new friends, and stories to tell.


The weekend turned out to be eventful. I gofelt new emotions, made new friends, and discovered new stories to tell.

The weekend turned out to be eventful; I got new emotions, new friends, and stories to tell.

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