April 6, 2021
Day 5: Favorite TV show
I have a lot of favorite TV Shows, when I was younger I spent a lot of time watching series on my computer, I really liked Gossip Girl, Vampire Diaries, The Originals, and Pretty Little Liars.
I also like to watch Grey's Anatomy, I always cry with that TV show, I still cry when I remember the death of my two favorite character, they were in a plane accident and their dead were really horrible.
They were a couple, and they were angry with each other’s, but when the time of the dead came, they forgave their selves, it was very, very sad.
I can’t believe they had died like that, they didn’t deserve it. But well, writers do whatever they like most.
Is annoying.
Mark and Lexie deserve better, and I’m sure that everyone who had seen the series agrees with me.
Day 5: Favorite TV show
I have a lot of favorite TV Shows, w. When I was younger, I spent a lot of time watching series on my computer,. I really liked "Gossip Girl", "Vampire Diaries", "The Originals", and "Pretty Little Liars".
I also like to watch "Grey's Anatomy,". I always cry withen I watch that TV show,. I still cry when I remember the deaths of my two favorite character, ts. They were in a plane accident and their deadths were really horrible.
They were a couple, and they were angry with each other’s, but when the time of their deadths came, they forgave their selves, ieach other. It was very, very sad.
I can’t believe they had died like that, t. They didn’t deserve it.
But, well, writers do whatever they like most.
It's annoying.
Mark and Lexie deserve better, and I’m sure that everyone who hads seen the series agrees with me.
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The main issue that I see here is that you combine multiple sentences into single long, run-on sentences. Just work on breaking up your sentences a bit more and you'll be set!
April 6, 2021
Yes, I get it hahah, thanks very much!!
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But well, writers do whatever they like most. But, well, writers do whatever they like most. |
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Is annoying. It's annoying. |
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Mark and Lexie deserves better, and I’m sure that everyone who had seen the series agree with me. |
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I have a lot of favorite TV Shows, when I was younger I spent a lot of time watching series on my computer, I really liked Gossip Girl, Vampire Diaries, The Originals, and Pretty Little Liars. I have a lot of favorite TV Shows |
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I have a lot of favorite TV Shows, when I was younger I spent a lot of time watching series in my computer, I really liked Gossip Girl, Vampire Diaries, The Originals and Pretty Little Liars. |
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I also like to watch Greys Anatomy, I always cry with that TV show, I still cry when I remember the dead of my two favorite character, they were in a plane accident and their dead where really horrible. |
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They were a couple, and they were angry with each other’s, but when the time of the dead came, they forgave their selves, it was very, very sad. They were a couple, and they were angry with each other |
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I can’t believe they had died like that, they didn’t deserved it. |
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I also like to watch Grey's Anatomy, I always cry with that TV show, I still cry when I remember the death of my two favorite character, they were in a plane accident and their dead were really horrible. I also like to watch "Grey's Anatomy |
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I can’t believe they had died like that, they didn’t deserve it. I can’t believe they |
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Mark and Lexie deserve better, and I’m sure that everyone who had seen the series agrees with me. Mark and Lexie deserve better, and I’m sure that everyone who ha |
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