March 17, 2025
My favourite food is Japanese chicken curry.
It's usually a meal I would prepare after a long day at work, when I am tired or sad.
First of all because it's so easy to cook. Then because it tastes amazing. You just have to cut some carrots, potatoes and onions. Then, cook the onions until golden and let it all simmer with some water.
Prepare your chicken, cut and cook it. Add it to the stew with one or two curry-roux and let it simmer again. Serve with some rice, and that's it!
The flavour is sweet and spicy. It feels so comfy and warm, perfect for cold weather!
Day 4 - fFavorite fFood
In a title, proper nouns, adjectives, verbs, and adverbs should have the first letter capitalised.
ThenAlso because it tastes amazing.
"then" is a really good transition word, however I think it's more appropriate when discussing the passage of events, (for example, "First I rode my bike home, then I washed my hands in my bathroom sink") When you make two statements that have no specific sequential order, I think a different transition would be better ("also", "and" "in addition").
Prepare your chicken, cut, and cook it.
This sentence is correct and concise, but I added an "Oxford comma" also known as a "serial comma". This is grammatically optional, you don't necessarily have to use this comma, but adding it in this context could clarify that cutting and cooking are two separate steps in your process, though the majority of readers would understand just fine without it.
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This entry has wonderful vocabulary! Nice and concise. Just keep an eye on your transition words.
Day 4 - fFavorite fFood
1 - Certain words in titles start with capital letters. These words include all nouns, adjectives, verbs and adverbs, as well as the first and last word in the title
2 - "Favorite," is the American spelling. Pretty much everyone else spells it "favourite." Neither is wrong, but you do need to be consistent. Your next sentence has a different spelling
My favourite / favorite food is Japanese chicken curry.
-or- for American English
-our- for anything else
It's usually a meal I would prepare after a long day at work, when I am tired or sad.
FI like it first of all because it's so easy to cook.
This is called a dependant clause. If your sentence has one clause, and that clause starts with a conjunction, then it's usually wrong
ThenI also like it because it tastes amazing.
Then, cook the onions until golden and let it all simmer with somein water.
Prepare your chicken, then cut and cook it.
Add it to the stew with one or two curry-roux and let it simmer again.some more
Serve with some rice, and that's it!
The flavour is sweet and spicy.
It feels so comfy and warm, perfect for cold weather!
Day 4 - fFavorite fFood
All words in the title are usually capitalized in English.
My favourite food is Japanese chicken curry.
It's usually a meal I (would) prepare after a long day at work, when I am *feeling* tired or sad.
Your sentence is correct as it it. I put (would) in brackets because it's better without it. And I added *feeling* - the sentence still works without, but sounds a bit off.
First of all because it's so easy to cook.
Then because it tastes amazing.
You just have to cut some carrots, potatoes and onions.
Then, cook the onions until golden and let it all simmer with some water.
Prepare your chicken,: cut and cook it.
Add it to the stew with one or two curry-roux and let it simmer again.
Serve with some rice, and that's it!
The flavour is sweet and spicy.
It feeltastes so comfy and warm, perfect for cold weather!
Food can't "feel", so it should be either "it tastes so comfy..." as I put above, or "It makes me feel so comfy..."
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Great writing! I may borrow your recipe!
Day 4 - favorite food
My favourite food is Japanese chicken curry.
It's usually a meal I would prepare after a long day at work, when I am tired or sad.
Feels more natural without the comma.
First of all because it's so easy to cook.
Then because it tastes amazing.
You can consider combining with the previous sentence, something like:
“First of all because it’s so easy to cook, second (of all) because it tastes amazing.”
“First of all because it’s so easy to cook, and because it tastes amazing.”
You just have to cut some carrots, potatoes and onions.
Then, cook the onions until golden and let it all simmer with some water.
Prepare your chicken, cut and cook it.
It sound fine but you can consider adding a connective like:
“Next, prepare your chicken, cut and cook it.”
Add it to the stew with one or two curry-roux and let it simmer again.
Serve with some rice, and that's it!
The flavour is sweet and spicy.
It makes me feels so comfy and warm, which is perfect for cold weather!
It feels more natural to express that the curry makes you feel comfy and warm (while eating it, or after you have eaten it), rather than the curry itself being comfy and warm.
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Good job! The passage was easy to understand and expresses your ideas clearly. Makes me want some Japanese chicken curry now! Keep it up!
Day 4 - favorite food This sentence has been marked as perfect! Day 4 - All words in the title are usually capitalized in English. Day 4 - 1 - Certain words in titles start with capital letters. These words include all nouns, adjectives, verbs and adverbs, as well as the first and last word in the title 2 - "Favorite," is the American spelling. Pretty much everyone else spells it "favourite." Neither is wrong, but you do need to be consistent. Your next sentence has a different spelling Day 4 - In a title, proper nouns, adjectives, verbs, and adverbs should have the first letter capitalised. |
My favourite food is Japanese chicken curry. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! My favourite / favorite food is Japanese chicken curry. -or- for American English -our- for anything else |
It's usually a meal I would prepare after a long day at work, when I am tired or sad. It's usually a meal I would prepare after a long day at work Feels more natural without the comma. It's usually a meal I (would) prepare after a long day at work, when I am *feeling* tired or sad. Your sentence is correct as it it. I put (would) in brackets because it's better without it. And I added *feeling* - the sentence still works without, but sounds a bit off. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
First of all because it's so easy to cook. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect!
This is called a dependant clause. If your sentence has one clause, and that clause starts with a conjunction, then it's usually wrong |
Then because it tastes amazing. Then because it tastes amazing. You can consider combining with the previous sentence, something like: “First of all because it’s so easy to cook, second (of all) because it tastes amazing.” “First of all because it’s so easy to cook, and because it tastes amazing.” This sentence has been marked as perfect!
"then" is a really good transition word, however I think it's more appropriate when discussing the passage of events, (for example, "First I rode my bike home, then I washed my hands in my bathroom sink") When you make two statements that have no specific sequential order, I think a different transition would be better ("also", "and" "in addition"). |
You just have to cut some carrots, potatoes and onions. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Then, cook the onions until golden and let it all simmer with some water. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! Then, cook the onions until golden and let it all simmer with |
Prepare your chicken, cut and cook it. Prepare your chicken, cut and cook it. It sound fine but you can consider adding a connective like: “Next, prepare your chicken, cut and cook it.” Prepare your chicken Prepare your chicken, then cut and cook it. Prepare your chicken, cut, and cook it. This sentence is correct and concise, but I added an "Oxford comma" also known as a "serial comma". This is grammatically optional, you don't necessarily have to use this comma, but adding it in this context could clarify that cutting and cooking are two separate steps in your process, though the majority of readers would understand just fine without it. |
Add it to the stew with one or two curry-roux and let it simmer again. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! Add it to the stew with one or two curry-roux and let it simmer |
Serve with some rice, and that's it! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
The flavour is sweet and spicy. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
It feels so comfy and warm, perfect for cold weather! It makes me feel It feels more natural to express that the curry makes you feel comfy and warm (while eating it, or after you have eaten it), rather than the curry itself being comfy and warm. It Food can't "feel", so it should be either "it tastes so comfy..." as I put above, or "It makes me feel so comfy..." This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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