Nov. 27, 2024
Day 19
Nowadays, having acknowledge about other cultures is necessary in our society. The most important reason is because this era is becoming the era of globalization. Due to the development of science and technology, the distance between different countries is shortened. Additionally, through different areas such as studying abroad, overseas tourism or immigration, the culture can be exchanged and we are living in a multicultural society with diversity cultures. Therefore, in order to to blended with people from different cultural backgrounds, it is necessary to have an open attitude with other cultures.
Hiện nay trong xã hội việc hiểu về các văn hóa khác là cần thiết. Lý do lớn nhất là vì thời đại này đang tiến vào thời đại toàn cầu hóa. Nhờ vào sự phát triển khoa học kỹ thuật khoảng cách giữa các quốc gia rút ngắn. Thêm vào đó nhiều lĩnh vực như du học, du lịch hải ngoại, di dân có thể giao lưu và chúng ta đang sống trong một xã hội đa văn hóa với nhiều nền văn hóa đa dạng. Do đó để có thể sống hòa hợp với những người có bối cảnh văn hóa đa dạng thì cần thiết có tư thế cởi mở đối với các nền văn hóa khác.
Day 19
Nowadays, having acknowledge about other cultures is necessary in our society.
The most important reason is because this era is becomwe are approaching the era of globalization.
What you wrote is correct, this is just another way of saying it. Saying "era" twice is a little repetitive.
Due to the development of science and technology, the distance between different countries is shortened.
Additionally, through different areactivities such as studying abroad, overseas tourism or immigration, the culture can be exchanged, and today, we are living in a multicultural society with a diversity of cultures.
A diversity of cultures / diverse cultures
Therefore, in order to to blended with people from different cultural backgrounds, it is necessary to have an open attitude with other cultures.
Present tense
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Your writing is great, very indepth and insightful.
Nov. 28, 2024
Thank you for your correction.
Day 19
Nowadays, having acknowledge abouting other cultures is necessary in our society.
The most important reason is because this era is becoming the era of globalization.
Additionally, through different areas such as studying abroad, overseas tourism or immigration, the culture can be exchanged and we are living in a multicultural society with diversitye cultures.
Therefore, in order to to blended with people from different cultural backgrounds, it is necessary to have an open attitude with other cultures.
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Nov. 28, 2024
Thank you for your correction.
Nov. 28, 2024
You are welcome :)
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Therefore, in order to to blended with people from different cultural backgrounds, it is necessary to have an open attitude with other cultures. Therefore, in order to Therefore, in order to Present tense |
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Nowadays, having acknowledge about other cultures is necessary in our society. Nowadays, This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The most important reason is because this era is becoming the era of globalization. This sentence has been marked as perfect! The most important reason is because What you wrote is correct, this is just another way of saying it. Saying "era" twice is a little repetitive. |
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Due to the development of science and technology, the distance between different countries is shortened. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Additionally, through different areas such as studying abroad, overseas tourism or immigration, the culture can be exchanged and we are living in a multicultural society with diversity cultures. Additionally, through different areas such as studying abroad, overseas tourism or immigration, Additionally, through different a A diversity of cultures / diverse cultures |
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