yesterday
Day 18
I've been really busy the last few days. I've been key mashing all day. Suprised my fingers aren't stumps. (I got this expression from a game, and I found it really funny, so I wrote it down and used it here. What do you think of it?)
I ordered a few packs of tortillas and a bottle of tonkatsu sauce online. I'm going to make pork wraps for lunch every day. I'll try it out and maybe write a recipe for you guys!
I've been key mashing keys all day.
SuI'm surprised my fingers aren't stumps.
today
Thank you! Have a wonderful weekend!
Surprised my fingers aren't stumps.
Feedback
Great expression! Corrected a typo ("surprised" is a tough word, a lot of native speakers spell it wrong too.)
today
Thank you for catching that typo! Have a wonderful weekend!
I've been key mashingpounding the keys all day.
I had to look up "key mashing." I think you mean something like "typing furiously"? Using your keyboard to write quickly?
I saw that "key mashing" and several similar phrases mean typing a bunch of random letters. I'm pretty sure you didn't do that all day!
"Pounding the keys" and "hammering the keys" can mean typing furiously.
Feedback
Grammatically, this is perfect.
I love the expression you learned and incorporated.
yesterday
I need to clarify "perfect" after reading the feedback from hrenee15. The reason I say it is perfect is because it has such a strong "voice." That means it sounds like you. This piece of writing is informal, fun, and something I can imagine being shared among friends. It's not supposed to sound like textbook English, it's supposed to sound like you.
today
Thank you! I want to befriend everyone here, and I don't want my writing to be boring or tedious. I encountered this problem when I revised writings in my native language. People tend to write in prose, trying to describe a beautiful scene or something, but with so many mistakes that it becomes hard to figure out the original meaning. I mean, there's nothing wrong with the form or the intention to write prose, but it just doesn't seem very interesting.
today
Key mashing = typing a bunch of random letters
Okay, I get it! Guess I shouldn't use that phrase here. Of course, I wasn't just randomly tapping on the keyboard all day long! XD
I've been key -mashing all day.
I believe you put a hyphen here, but I could be wrong.
SuI'm surprised that my fingers aren't stumps.
(I gotlearned this expression from a game, and I found it really funny, so I wrote it down and used it here.
What do you think of it?)
today
Thank you! Have a wonderful weekend!
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I've been really busy the last few days. |
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I've been key mashing all day. I've been key I believe you put a hyphen here, but I could be wrong. I've been I had to look up "key mashing." I think you mean something like "typing furiously"? Using your keyboard to write quickly? I saw that "key mashing" and several similar phrases mean typing a bunch of random letters. I'm pretty sure you didn't do that all day! "Pounding the keys" and "hammering the keys" can mean typing furiously. I've been |
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Suprised my fingers aren't stumps.
Surprised my fingers aren't stumps. |
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(I found this expression really funny, so I wrote it down and used it here. |
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What do you think of it?) What do you think |
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I ordered a few packs of tortillas and a bottle of tonkatsu sauce online. |
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I'm going to make pork wraps for lunch every day. |
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I'll try it out and maybe write a recipe for you guys! |
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(I got this expression from a game, and I found it really funny, so I wrote it down and used it here. (I |
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