Feb. 18, 2023
Day 10 Journaling
Hi ๐
Today, I woke up at 9 am but it's an habit for me. Normally, I wake up at 6:30 am every day. I ate my breakfast alone and, while eating, I watched video in English on YouTube. Then I went back to my bedroom and I spent time on my phone. I had a lot to do but I was lazy so I didn't ๐.
At 12, me and my family ate lunch and after that, I helped my father because he was trying to construct the floor of our attic. It was really hard but funny and I appreciated it. I really enjoy taking time with my father and just making him happy makes me happy too.
After helping my father, I went to my yard to see my bunny and my three chicken ๐.
I hope you also enjoyed your day !
Day 10 Journaling
Hi. ๐
Today, I woke up at 9 am but it's an habit for me.
Normally, I wake up at 6:30 am every day.
I ate my breakfast alone and, while eating, I watched videos in English on YouTube.
Then I went back to my bedroom and I spent time on my phone.
I had a lot to do but I was lazy so I didn't do any of it ๐.
At 12, me and my family and I ate lunch and, after that, I helped my father because he was trying to construct the floor of our attic.
It was really hard but funny andso I appreciated it.
I really enjoy takspending time with my father and just making him happy makes me happy, too.
aww! How sweet!
After helping my father, I went to myout into the yard to see my bunny and my three chickens ๐.
I hope you also enjoyed your day !
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Good work!
Feb. 19, 2023
Thanks for the correction: )
Day 10 Journaling
Hi ๐
Today, I woke up at 9 am but, it's an habit for me.
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Normally, I wake up at 6:30 am every day.
I ate my breakfast alone and, while eating, I watched a YouTube video in English on YouTube.
Then I went back to my bedroom and I spent some time on my phone.
I had a lot to do but I was lazy so I didn't ๐.
At 12, me and my family ate lunch and after that, I helped my father because he was trying to constructrenovate the floor of our attic.
It was really hard but funny and I appreciatenjoyed it.
I really enjoy takspending time with my father and just making him happy makes me happy too.
After helping my father, I went to my yard to see my bunny and my three chickens ๐.
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Great work, you have a really natural level of English.
Feb. 19, 2023
Thanks ๐
Hi ๐
Today, I woke up at 9 am but it's an habit for me.
Normally, I wake up at 6:30 am every day.
I ate my breakfast alone and, while eating, I watched video in English on YouTube.
Then, I went back to my bedroom and I spent time on my phone.
I had a lot to do but I was lazy so I didn't ๐.
At 12, me and my family ate lunch and after that, I helped my father because he was trying to reconstruct the floor of our attic.
It was really hard but funny and I appreciated it.
I really enjoy taking timhe time to be with my father and just making him happy makes me happy too.
After helping my father, I went to my yard to see my bunny and my three chickens ๐.
I hope you also enjoyed your day !
Feedback
Good job!
Feb. 19, 2023
Thanks
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