Jan. 2, 2026
Datemaki (154)
I wrote about the Japanese New Year's food "osechi" yesterday.
There are variety of food in the osechi.
I'd like to try to write one of them.
"Datemaki" is one of my favorite dishes in osechi.
It's a sweet egg roll made with eggs and fish paste.
You might think, "Eww, fish and eggs?", but it's actually tasty.
It doesn't smell fishy at all.
It's the food we eat on New Year's, but it's sold in a supermarket throughout the year.
However, we rarely eat it as everyday meal.
昨日、日本のお正月の食べ物おせちについて書きました。
おせちにはいろいろな食べ物があります。
その中の一つを書いてみたいと思います。
伊達巻きは、私の好きなおせちです。
それは、卵と魚で作られている甘い卵ロールです。
「えー、卵と魚？」って思うかもしれませんが、実はおいしいんです。
全然、魚臭くないんです。
それは、お正月に食べるものですが、実は一年中お店で売られています。
でも、毎日の食事では、めったに食べません。
Datemaki
I wrote about the Japanese New Year's food "osechi" yesterday.
There are variety of fooditems in the osechi.
I'd like to try to write about one of them.
"Datemaki" is one of my favorite dishes in osechi.
It's a sweet egg roll made with eggs and fish paste.
You might think, "Eww, fish and eggs?", but it's actually tasty.
It doesn't smell fishy at all.
It's the food we eat on New Year's, but it's sold in athe supermarket throughout the year.
However, we rarely eat it as an everyday meal.
Jan. 4, 2026
Thank you so much for your corrections!
Datemaki
I wrote about the Japanese New Year's food "osechi" yesterday.
There are a variety of foods in thean osechi.
"There is a variety of foods in an osechi." works too!
"a" and "an" are used when talking about something but not being specific about which one. (Example: "I want to eat a fish" would talk about any fish, "I want to eat the fish from this restaurant" would talk about a specific one.)
If there is only one kind of osechi, "the" is still OK.
The only difference between "a" and "an" is that "an" used when the word after it starts with a vowel (a, e, i, o, u).
I'd like to try to write about one of them.
"Datemaki" is one of my favorite dishes in osechi.
It's a sweet egg roll made with eggs and fish paste.
It doesn't smell fishy at all.
It's thea food we eat on New Year's, but it's sold in a supermarket throughout thes all year.
If you are talking about one supermarket but not being specific about which one, "it's sold in a supermarket throughout the year" is OK.
If you are talking about more than one supermarket, you need to make it plural (usually by adding an "s" at the end). When something is plural, it doesn't usually need a particle like "a".
"Throughout the year" is still OK, but "all year" sounds more natural.
However, we rarely eat it as an everyday meal.
"a"/"an" can be used if something belongs to a category too. (Example: "Salmon is a type of fish.")
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これはとても面白いです ! 大半のアメリカ人では多いアルコールを飲みました .
(This is very interesting! Most Americans drink a lot of alcohol for New Year's.)
Jan. 2, 2026
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations in detail. In Japan, people drink a lot of alcohol for New Year's, too.
I'd like to try to write about one of them.
However, we rarely eat it as an everyday meal.
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Great work
Jan. 2, 2026
Thank you so much for your corrections!
Datemaki
I wrote about the Japanese New Year's food "osechi" yesterday.
There are a variety of foods in the osechi.
OR: "There is a variety of food in the osechi."
I'd like to try to write about one of them.
"Datemaki" is one of my favorite dishes in osechi.
It's a sweet egg roll made with eggs and fish paste.
You might think, "Eww, fish and eggs?", but it's actually tasty.
It doesn't smell fishy at all.
It's the food we eat on New Year's, but it's sold in a supermarkets throughout the year.
Not just one supermarket, but generally in all or many supermarkets.
However, we rarely eat it as an everyday meal.
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Excellent work - only a few very minor mistakes. And it sounds like a tasty dish, I will definitely have to try it some day.
Jan. 2, 2026
Thank you so much for your corrections! I'm glad that you are interested in Japanese food.
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